This is a wonderful and engrossing story. Despite the time since your last update, I hope someday that you decide to finish it.

The characters play so well off of each other that I can't help wanting more. Should you ever decide to pick up the story again, I will be a devout reader and reviewer.

You yourself were skilled at writing four and a half years ago, I can only imagine that you have improved since then. I look forward to anything that you might compose in the future.

So it was Brent all along and now he's got this Moon Tears' assassin with him! I can't wait to see how the next chapter unfolds! Keep up the great work and update soon!

Wow, It's great to see an update of this great and awesome fic. Please, turn on anonymous reviews and update soon. Tnank you.

Hey dude great story, cant wait untill next chapter

Hey dude like the story so far, keep it up. Cant wait till chapter 8

A great chapter! I loved the part when Quistis showed Yuri up! I'm guessing that Squall is going to be that devoted knight that Ultimecia needs, right? Anyways, keep up the great work and update soon!

A wonderful chapter! I'm dying to know who the insider person is! Hopefully that person is revealed in chapter 7, which I'm going to go and read next.

I did find a couple of grammatical errors, but that didn't take away of how great this chapter was! I can't wait to see who is the traitor among Rinoa's men! On to chapter 6...

Great story so far. I like the more medieval setting. Keep up the good work; update soon!

And also... I noticed the reference to Legend of Dragoon. :)

An amazing chapter! I wonder what Ultimecia has against Rinoa? I love this story so far. It has a great storyline, so keep up the great work! Update soon!

I really liked this chapter! It was great!I liked the little flashback with Rinoa and her mom! That was good. Anyways, I'm getting very attached to this story. I can't wait to see what questions Squall's going to ask the general. Hurry and update soon!

Wow. That was a great chapter, probably better than the first but then I guess that is because there is more action coming into it. The dream was quite interesting too, giving some background information on his character in your story. Kind of sad how it still haunts him. :(

I have to say that I sometimes found it a little confusing to differentiate between speech and thoughts. Perhaps you could do thoughts in itallics to make it more clear? Just a suggestion. _ Anyway, great chapter, and I'm so sorry that it has taken me so long to review and update soon! This is an excellent story!

That was a great chapter! I really liked the dream that Squall had. I'm guessing that he didn't have time to save his mom. Poor Squall. Anyways, I'm really curious to found out what happens next, so keep up the great work!

I really liked the beginning of this story! You've gotten my attention.I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!