Shoot. Stupid touchscreen phone posted looong before I was finished. Luckily, I've learned to take precautions and copy long comments to memos. Anyway, take two.

This fanfic was... incredible. I'm a hardcore Saw fan. I don't know if you've seen them all, so I'm gonna try to not spoil anything. If you've seen them, you'll know that the fate of Adam, Lawrence and John didn't exactly... turn up this way. Given that this was written before Saw

2 was released, "Rebirth" can't really be seen as a reimagining. So I tried hard to read it as a 'regular' fanfic. And it was incredible.

You had me at the edge throughout the whole story. I had my heart in my mouth several times (I know, cliché). I laughed and I cried. And my little queer self found the sex scenes, in Adam's own words, strangely... erotic. You really fleshed out the characters (eheheh... literature major here...) and you. Absolutely. Nailed. It. with their personalities.

There are a few things I would like to read more about, however. It has mostly got to do with initial character development. It's gonna be a) a ridiculously long review, and b) the fanfic would be a *lot* longer if you wanted to follow my advice (sorry... channeling my professor here). So let's leave it for now.

I have a confession to make. I wish I could PM you, but whatever.
I made a "book" out of your fanfic. *blushes*
Just for myself though. I haven't even shown my fiance. I will NOT let anyone touch it, ever.
I took the liberty of making a front and back cover, a "teaser" first page and a "list of characters" page, and I even took the liberty to write an "about the author" page. *blushes more than Adam in bed*
On the back cover, I tried to imitate your style and write, well, a back cover. I also tried to imitate your style when I wrote the list of characters.

That's how much I love your story. 3
I hope you'll read this some day.

I don't know if you'll ever read this, you were last active ten goddang years ago. But I'm crossing my fingers, because I REALLY want to talk to you. Warning: this will be a looong text :p7

This fanfic was... incredible. I'm a hardcore Saw fan. I don't know if you've seen them all, so I'm gonna try to not spoil anything. If you've seen them, you'll know that the fate of Adam, Lawrence and John didn't exactly... turn up this way. Given that this was written before Saw 2 was released, "Rebirth" can't really be seen as a reimagining. So I tried hard to read itvasva

This was everything I needed after watching the movie. It was really well written and I'm itching to read it again. I loved absolutely everything, you did a fantastic job! Thank you for this!

Idk if you'll ever see this, but i hope so. I'm a fellow chainshipper. I love writing it as much as I love reading it. This was phenominal. I read the whole thing in the span of 2 days. I had to force myself to take a break. Your writing and attention to detail and atmosphere, was methodical. This fanfic is so good, it almost makes me want to stop writing, because I'll never write anything this good. I thought I was a good writer until I read this. I also hesitated to comment because there are some similarities in a couple of mine, except mine was written 10 years afterwards. I didn't want it to look bad. I assure you, I had never seen this fanfic till 2 days ago. It's not major similarities though. Besides I've got nothing on you anyways. This is the best chainshipping I've ever read. Good job.

One of the best fanfiction ever! Thank you!

The story was so perfect. I found it on Tumblr and have taken the past several hours reading through it and thoroughly enjoying every word of it. It's cute and sexy and realistic and everything the Chainship fandom needs. Thank you for the story.

Oh. Poor Allison. :/ I never thought I'd say that. I really hope Lawrence comes clean with her soon, she's obviously tormented by the thought of her unintentionally pushing him away. Again, you've characterized her perfectly; I couldn't dream of anything better. So let's see what happens next!

That was too cute! Adam and Larry/Steve, I love it! Those last lines, though...so powerful. What *will* happen? *rushes to find out*

This chapter was lovely! I especially liked those last two paragraphs; the characterization they provided was fantastic. But ah, back to reality...Lawrence is still married to Allison, which is who I think Adam is referring to. On to the next chapter!

Despite how much I love Chainshipping, I gotta feel bad for Allison. :/ I hope Larry confesses/she finds out soon.

Awww. Adam is just too cute. :3 These fluffy chapters are a nice reprieve to the angst, I must admit, though I'm sure that'll pick right back up soon. And of course, I'll love it, because what is fluff without angst? :P Chapter 22 time!

Again with the peanut butter! XD I have no idea why that is so hilarious to me, but it is. And the lovers make plans to meet again...interesting ;) I guess I better read what happens during their next rendezvous!

I don't know what to call this chapter. Brilliant, of course, as always, but while it was sweet, and funny, there's still the realization that Larry is a cheater-cheater-pumpkin-eater and that never ends well. :P Let's hope Allison doesn't do anything too drastic if/when (well, I'm pretty sure when) they divorce, like take away Diana. Meep.

I loved this chapter! Awkward!Adam is just the best, though sexy!Larry is a close second. :') I wonder how this will change things...after all, they did just have sex, and Lawrence is still married. I guess I'll have to find out. Next chapter!

Poor Adam, all alone in that empty apartment. Though the peanut butter thing was funny to me. I don't know how, I guess it's simply because of how darn cute Adam is! Larry's a lucky guy. Or, he will be, anyway. :P