I love your writing style! And I love this series, the cameos at the end aaaaah. Also love how you wrote Haku as an ageless deity, which isn't touched on as much in the movie. Great work!

Yay! Wow, Kohaku's an awesome character in this story. I find it strange, though, that he didn't immediately notice the potential danger of the nearby plant. Wouldn't that automatically grab his attention? *blinks* Eh. *shrugs* I have no idea.

Hi! *waves*

-Kayura

Lol. Good... doggie?

Another nice chapter. One thing: you might want to stop doing the, "he wasn't scared, it would just..." and "she wouldn't, anyway, but..." You're telling us the characters' feeling and personalities without giving the readers the chance to find out for themselves. _ Just saying.

And I love how you made Chihiro's mother! Not horrible, but not perfect. She seems very, very real, and somehow matches the mother in the movie.

-Kayura

So I'm back! *cheers* And my roommate isn't even in the room telling me I type really fast! So hi! *waves* All in all, I am most definitely enjoying this. Chihiro as a kid is just adorable, and the story about the dog demon makes you hurt for it.

Well... this chapter was great, too! What else to say? Um, I want to just go on in the story, so... sorry!

-Kayrua

Ah, I don't wanna stop reading but I have to go to sleep! It makes me sad! ;_; Well, I'll be back again, and maybe I could actually write longer reviews, hmm?

-Kayura

Yeah, play that flute, Kohaku! *grins*

-Kayura

Yay! And I actually knew most of the words you used. *cheers*

-Kayura

Sweet! The Pearl thing is interesting, and imagining Kohaku running around playing music for kids just makes me smile.

-Kayura

Okay, I know my reviews are short, but my roommate is sleeping. ;_; Sorry! But this is really good. Then again, how could a three year old speak so perfectly? And understand so much?

Well, I'm obviously still reading, so whatever! _

-Kayura

omg this is amazing! i loved this its a wonderful explanation for the movie and an amazing start for a sequel to it. great work, the little dictionaries helped a lot!

well i'm off to read the sequel,

much love,

Katy

im really confused. ok, so, chihiro is 3 right now, but is the one who slept by her door haku? and if i is, then how old is he?

That's a hell of a match makeing service! Poor kohaku!

WOW, you have sucked me in entirely, this is an angle I've never seen taken before, to actually explore Haku and Chihiro's past history in detail. You are one talented writer with some highly original ideas. I loved the comparison to western and eastern dragons in this chapter, made me smile. (Being welsh I'm supposed to be protected by "ddraig goch" the red dragon. it's on our flag. I used to swear I could see him on foggy days on my mountain LOL) I guess that’s why I liked spirited away so much, a story about a friendly dragon. But I won’t bore you with all that. I will read more when I can.

I finally finished reading this one and i have got to say i'm impressed with how you're connecting your stories one after another. And i just love how you have the character's in your stories grow and the forshadowing is great too.

This was a sweet story I really enjoyed it.