Hard to pass judgement. Nothing inherantly bad, but just...strange, in a sense. Not so much that it's spelt "Prowler" here instead of Prower, not so much that Sally is being mentioned in what appears to be a Segaverse story, not so much that Tikal appears after so little buildup, but...I dunno. Still, it has potential at least.

Ok, you wouldn't believe how many times I've had to tell people this...

His last name is Prower, not ProwLer.

Tails must've made himself immortal. Right until it said what that grave said,I still somehow knew it was Tails, depressed, really depressed. I hate these kind of stories because I feel like I might cry at the end. I feel like I went through what he's going through because I barely got to ever see my dad and I love him alot, but he was taken to jail and I haven't seen him in 5 years but it seems like forever. I'cm rying while typeing this. I barely got to be around my dad. He was in jail when I was born, he came out for a few years, then went back, escaped, and was caught. That's all I remember.

Um... It was ok, It's written ok, hardly any mistakes. even tho it could of been extended longer... Or more explained at that,

Why can't tails die?

You could use that as your next fanfiction actually. kinda countiue off this one, into tails past explaining what happen to him..

But it was A ok story..

this is a Weird story continue

Well I didn't see that coming... NEAT!

Cool fic. I enjoyed reading it.