Good story...alternate circumstances that still bring us to the same outcome and future escapades...

Great story!

Nice story. by the way it is a hammer that you pull back on a gun to cock it, the trigger is what makes it shoot.

An excellent story with an interesting twist. I'm a sucker for a 'Lost lamb who finds a home' tale, and this one was not just touching, it was a downright tearjerker. Thank you for a great read.

Nice to see a new BV story pop up. You did a good job! J

Nice work here, I especialy liked the twist with Heaths mother. You handle all of there voices quite well. Have you ever been over to The Big Valley Virtual Valley site at ~Our_Big_

It's a great site full of BV stories, very freindly as well Again good work here. Thanks

I really like the premise of your story. It was an interesting twist. Thanks for writing a Big Valley story. There aren't enough good ones around.