Reviews for Only in the Dark
Pheonix09 chapter 5 . 12/13/2009
it was a great story
Anime Onnanoko chapter 5 . 1/1/2007
that was a really good ending and I really liked the ending as well
Tuli-Susi chapter 1 . 11/3/2006
oh the irony in that statement! stuck in an abandoned place buried under a pile of wood!
Should Probably Write More chapter 5 . 8/4/2006
hey. that was an awesome story! IT WASN'T STUPID AT ALL! SAYING THAT IS LIKE SAYING PICCASO, DA VINCI AND MONET'S PAINTINGS LOOK LIKE A DOG CAME UP AND DID A CRAP ALL OVER THE CANVAS! you should really give yourself more credit! my story is rubbish compared to yours mate! hope you update your other stories soon too!
Phoenix-Roar chapter 5 . 7/8/2005
O_O I'm sorry, this review is SO late! _

Anyway, GREAT STORY! :D I'm gonna read the sequel to it right now! Thanks for reviewing my newest chapter, by the way. _

KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!

Phoenix-Roar

~phoenix
Kais Devil chapter 5 . 5/10/2005
thats was awesoem

make another Kai hilary fic

UPDATE!
kris the ninja pirate chapter 5 . 4/1/2005
I love is story you have to update soon plz I really want you to update I put it on my favs
Abandoned Account 1 chapter 5 . 1/4/2005
It wasn't that bad, in fact I thought it was great! But you need t get one thing straight: The blue sharkfin stripes on Kai's face are not permanent. In the beginning of the second season (dubbed the season of suckiness) he didn't have those stripes, presumably because such things weren't allowed at the boarding school he was attending. Theories about covering make-up and thigs are possible, but Kai and make-up? I don't think so. I just thought I'd make that known. Can't wait to hear more from you!
geko-blackjack chapter 5 . 12/22/2004
Wow kool story you write really well!

I like the last couple of ending paragraphs...really moving... well anyway keep up he good writing!
Frostt chapter 5 . 12/22/2004
great story! aw the end was so cute..hillary kissed kai..hehe... I thought yer story was fantastic, even though you say its so bad...its really not. Real nice ending on the previous chapter by the way, i think its good you re-did it..so good jorb dearest. Cant wait for your next concept story...your details really are good, and it seems your writing really flourishes for fight scenes, and action scenes.. Keep up the struggle kid
Kawaii-Chibi-Kai's Lil Devil chapter 5 . 12/21/2004
wow...that was really good.i really liked it
Nubia chapter 5 . 12/21/2004
Your last chapter was better (chp.4), the ending is pretty good.
Kimkizna chapter 5 . 12/21/2004
it wasn't that bad, it was still pretty good
AznVKai chapter 5 . 12/21/2004
Kewl ending to the story! I'll be looking forward to the next story!
n231 chapter 5 . 12/21/2004
Good strong ending. aA definate fave for me!

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