| Reviews for Longing & Betrayal |
|---|
  kitten chapter 8 . 8/12/2011 omg i absolutly love this fanfic! the pip and seras moments are so sweet and adorible and the alucard and seras moments wher dark and sexy hee *two thumbs up!* u shoud contine with this story, update!ill be waiting! :3 |
 Dagger Kitsune chapter 8 . 9/29/2005 very nice. I enjoyed it. Dagger1211 |
| Ciarda Rois chapter 8 . 12/10/2004 I loved it! This is one of the best stories I've read. Great plot, good style, good fic! -Verdandi24 |
| Jonathan Cairns chapter 6 . 12/7/2004 brillent this story is really good. there are not enough stories like this keep it up Jonathan |
| DailyMassacre chapter 6 . 12/3/2004 dude this is one of the BEST Hellsing fictions I have ever read! and i'll tell you why! it's a pxs it's smutty in a good romantic way it has a plot and it's writtn sowell! Dear god, you must finish this soon before I explode! Fiona seems kinda mary-sueish but she is way to damn funny to be one! anyway...keep up the great work! |
| Thess chapter 6 . 11/28/2004 The small fluff/comfort in this chapter was a grateful break from the nightmares and darkness of the one before it. I like Seras' inner struggle, her loyalties put in question. And her final choice, not only the right people but also the right thing to do. Keep it up. |
| barncat chapter 3 . 11/15/2004 Yay! Ghost Pip and Seras! Hm...really cannot see much to change. Maybe put thoughts into italics or something so that they stand out? |
| RosoMC chapter 3 . 11/15/2004 That was quite nice, and I love PxS pairing. Please continue. Adding to favorites :) |
| Thess chapter 3 . 11/14/2004 Oh you posted! I love the plot and I do want to know what is Alucard plotting (though I would suggest to remove the 'curves in all the right places' in the description of Fiona, sounds too cliche. Nice body would sufice). Now in the beginning of chapter two you have repeated some paragrahs, some copy and paste problem, I gather. I loved Pip/Seras stuff in chapter three (particulary his explanation with the ladies). However, I will like to have less 'love' in wording because turns a bit sappy (and both are more action driver instead of talkers, opposite to Alucard&Integral). But otherwise was good! Update the rest. |
| Ciarda Rois chapter 1 . 11/14/2004 Sounds like a good beginning. Hope to see more written out soon. I liked the surname of Integra's old friend. It's the old version of my maiden name. :) -Verdandi24 |
