Cute! Thanks for writing this.

This was great! I was interesting to see both of their points of view. Thanks for sharing!

Dawwwwwwww!

That escalated quickly... :)

Wow... Beautiful, admirable work.

i love it

Awww! It's so cute!

Wow. That was...wow just wow. That story was just...OMG it was really good haha I can't find any words to describe it

I just wanted to let you know that "interactive and you-based" fics aren't allowed to be posted on the site. I won't report it, but I suggest changing it (or at least making sure you have a copy on your computer) in case it does get reported.

So yeah. I love this. A lot.

I love the second person perspective you have-I adore writing in it and I love finding other authors, particularly KakaSaku shippers, who do the same :)

This was also really sweet and lacking in cliches as well as angst-which is always a plus for this nut :)

Thanks for the lovely story!

~nut

wow did not see that coming but i liked it all the same

(Still going through your fics, forgive me for camping!)

Love the way you deliver your stories & how you incorporate the humour! :D

Beautiful two-shot.

Honestly, it's fanfics like these that make my day.

I love the whole POV/second-person you had going. When handled well, it effectively brings out all the emotion you want to convey in a piece. You did just that... and even managed to squeeze out a few tears from my eyes.

Lovely work! XD

so pretty :3

aww, very romantic and cute.