I really want to let you know, that I am in love with this piece. It is beautifully written and it broke my heart. It made me feel the pain of Sasuke and Naruto. You are a wonderful writer, thank you for sharing this piece with the rest of us.

crimsonfoxsoul

awwwwwwww. this is one of the few present-tense works of writing i've ever read that are good.

I love this perspective around their friendship. There's no hinting or anything depicting a future relationship- just innocent, and i like that. A calming read, very awesome

I was looking for a K rated story to read and this one struck me as a great re-capof inner lonliness Sasuke and Naruto could have felt before the time of their actual training. I like the start and finish. This story comes full circle and each character grows a bit happier without a word exchanged between them. Thanks for sharing.

Wow. i've been looking for stories like this for years i don't know HOW i missed this one. Im favoriting you and alerting

To me the story was very deep. I like how Sasuke walks over to Naruto for a moment.

Aww! I like _

This was sweet & sad and well done. There may have been a couple of mistakes but nothing so major that I can think of it right now. I just have to keep reminding myself that your spelling isn't wrong it's just that Australian & American English are different.

There's no reason to blame this story on anything as I don't think you can be accused of doing anything wrong. Good job in trying something new. It's always good to extend yourself.

I like how you seem to bring something to nothing but I'll elaborate more on that when I review some of your other stories as I haven't quite figured out how to properly express myself. And probably never will but I'll give it a shot anyway.

So thanks for writing. I'm quite a picky person & a bit of a perfectionist but I have enjoyed your works immensely.

OMG, this was so kyoot!

It's fantastically good with a hint of bittersweet (I felt like crying at the end XD).

Rah! -shoots fist up in the air- Keep writing! Good job!

((Eh, this is probably my worst review yet, since it's about 1AM...))

~~Lynn

~BlackSunflower

KAWAII! oh, crap, this is my bro's profile... crap. I"M REALLY CALLIETITAN! anywhosies... KAWAII! SO KAWAII I COULD DIE! seriously, very well written. YOSH! nicely done.

Aw! So cute!

Another great friendship story! Amazing job, this is just as good as the other ones! I love the ending, too. _ Btw, in your note, you were saying something about debating whether Naruto or Sasuke had the most tragic past. If you are interested, i wrote a short fanfiction debating that too, if you wouldn't mind checking it out.

good story...

Spectrum,

Saw your link to this page from NarutoFan Forums. This is the first fanfic I've read on Naruto. I should say... stunning work. You brought out the emotional undertones of Naruto and Sasuke very well. Looking forward to read more of you work! Good work girl! :)

Suggestions/Comments: Switching back and forth between Naruto and Sasuke felt a lil tedious at some point. But then, if you are a hardcore Naruto fan, you wouldn't notice! :) And then, I doubt if Sasuke would've come and smiled at Naruto. Not him! :)

Anyway... other than me being picky, you've done a wonderful job! Keep it up!

Naveen!M

Beautiful...I love it! And I read another story but I didn't reviewed...sorry about that XDu...but really, I love it!