Did you forget Danny's ice powers?

This is without a doubt one of my absolute FAVOURITE Fanfictions EVER! Honestly, I've read this twice already and each time I've been up til the early hours of the morning reading it.
You're an absolutely amazing writer, the way you describe the scenes actually creates a vivid image in the readers mind.
It's rare you read a good crossover between fanfictions, especially Danny Phantom and Teen Titans, but well done!
Sizzle/Flammadea has got to be one of the best, psychotic villains I've read of, you hate her and want her dead but pity her and what she went through at the same time, its a delicate balance but amazing if you get it right, which you did. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. I liked how the battle scenes were drawn out and described in detail, it's hard to find writings like that. Longest battle scenes I've ever read and it was great! :) Usually the story is over too fast and the fight scenes are over in less than a page, but this is of absolutely epic proportions.
This would be a seriously amazing movie, because it has it's ups and downs, like you see the utter despair from Danny when he is told off by Noel/Saviour and when he loses to Sizzle/Flammadea, but then you see the highlights, like when he in turn, gets up Noel/Saviour. I love the twists involved and how there are multiple POV's throughout the entire thing, like how we see what happened to Sizzle/Flammadea, see why Noel/Saviour was acting the way he was, Danny's afterlife stage (well AFTER afterlife, if ya know what i mean) and the inner turmoil as he wrestled with how he had to defeat Sizzle/Flammadea.
Honestly, well bloody done. I REALLY wish this would become a movie, if my friend ever becomes a big time movie director (like he is studying to be) i am so nominating you :)
I dont post reviews often and im new to FF so i'm sorry if this is too long, but i had to get my thoughts out.

PhantomMistress1997 out Y

This is how I think Starfire would say must the ponies go to the house of slaughter?

(actually sirriusthemoonblade on fanfiction)

may I just say it has been a pleasure to read this. very wonderfully written with a great dash of humor. marvellous.
really love the whole 'primmortal' thing. I look forward to more of you writing.

Holy shit. This is the longest fight scene I have ever seen. I gotta give you points for making this crazy villain.

That was awesome! SUPER! Despite the cursing it was awesome! Best crossover EVER! Really awesome! REALLY!

Okay, I'm reviewing early. But I think cursing just ruined part of the story. And the sexual thing was... just... plain wrong. I'm not saying I don't like it, I'm saying that it's preferable. I LOVE this story! LOVe it I tell ya! Just that part made me shiver a little! Please don't repeat that! You can, but... yeah, you know.

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH I ALWAYS IMAGINED THE PHANTOMVERSE AS A PART OF THE SANDMANVERSE AND THEN YOU INCLUDED DEATH AND IT WAS JUST PERFECT AND AAAAAAHHHHHH THAT WAS WONDERFUL! 88DDDDDDDDDDDDD

How did Sizzle get through the ghost shielding? She wasn't inside the shield when she left Paulina; otherwise, Danny would have been close enough to attempt to save both her and his dad. Did she accidentally activate the shielding while wildly pressing buttons in her insane mission to destroy Danny with F.U.M.B.L.E.?

I found this page while looking for a Dave Barry article, in which the author threatens his computer (saying "ME HIT COMPUTER IN SCREEN WITH BIG ROCK") when it presents him with a syntax error message. I was looking for Dave Barry; I did not expect to find fanfiction. I am sorry not to include a review of your prose with my comment, but I feel the need to point out that you have plagiarized Dave Barry.

Despite an awesome writing and an interesting story, the fight with Sizzle was TOO DAMN LONG. It is not as if the battle scenes were plain and uncreative, but battle after battle after battle really knocked off any excitement. I skipped half of the Starfire's fight and did not feel like missing anything important.

I can't wait to read more of this!
MidnightRain

Okay... Definantly one of the best teen titans/danny phantom crossovers... I love it a whole lot... but I have no clue who half the people at T tower are... he he... GREAT STORY, THOUGH!

Oh, and i'm new to fan fiction and can't quite figure out how to post my MANY stories... he he...

AMAZING. When I was reading the story, I actually hoped Danny would snap and release some untapped power or something. Morbid much?

On another note, THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC. I teared up when reading this story. And I LOVED the part when Danny told Noel off. THAT WAS JUST PLAIN AWESOME.

This story deserves to be published as an actual book!

P.S. I actually started humming the last few notes of the ending to Danny Phantom when I read that last part :D

I cannot tell you how amazed I am. I cannot explain it in words how utterly amazing this story was to read. At the ending, I cried inside because it was the end. I still am. And I swear that I really can't stop getting over the shock of how great this story was.

The way that you wrote it, the language, the words - everything was just phenomenal. It made me feel like I was watching a Danny Phantom and Teen Titans crossover Movie with your added twist in it. I loved this story and reading it nearly tore me apart because of all the added suspense and terror I was feeling. I could literally FEEL Haylay's agony, rage, frustration and traumatizing terror. I could feel her utter dislike for men.

I was with Danny when I felt pity for her. She never deserved to go through all that hell. And I can't help but scream every single second of the story "HAYLAY WAS ABUSED WHEN SHE WAS YOUNGER, THIS ISN'T HER FAULT! SHE'S BEEN TORTURED INTO MADNESS!" xD Lol, but then again...I really wanted the bitch to die.

She was soooo freaking annoying, always coming back and ARGH - she frustrated me to no end xD But I still had that small flicker of pity, that small VERY nice part of me that was terribly sorry for her.

In the end, I really really wished that I didn't read this story so fast. But hey, It's like 3:46 in the morning here and been reading this for probably more than five hours. I'm a VERY fast reader and if I took that long - I shudder to think how long other people or my family and friends, would take time in reading this xD

I swear, this story was so amazing that I literally wished that it was a real movie. I wish that this was movie. DESIREE! COME HERE AND GRANT MY WIIISH! I seriously, really, FRUSTRATINGLY wish that someone would read this and find it so inspirational, they'd make it a movie. I'm not kidding. I really want that to happen and if it does - I will die. I swear, but I'm only be half-dead because then I'd be a halfa (my life-long dream!) and then I wouldn't miss your movie premiere.

Yeah - this HAS to be made into a movie. I'm not joking because I freaking wish that it would. I think it would someday...:P

But right now, I need to tell you how awesome this story is.

And sadly, like all the other awesome and TOTALLY AMAZING stories that I've read - I don't EVER have the words -.- But I can always say forever that I wish that I didn't finish reading this. Your description on humans and heroes were amazing. Some of the ideas, I already knew - but some even surprised me for once. And lol, I'm not easily surprised :D

Anyways, this story was great. I'm sadly have to be going to bed over wise I'll be a grogging mess in the morning xD Your stories are awesome. DON'T EVER DOUBT OR DELETE THEM. Because then I will be like:

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And you do not want that happening...xD