that fluff was

I thaught it was pretty good. You should check out 'Destines' by Firenze.

I actually find this piece of fluff really cute. It's got some serious discussion in it and well, they're talking like normal not-completely-pure kids. Refreshing even so don't feel bad about it ;) good job

cute :-)

Strange and awkward at first but a little satisfying in the end.

ARG, i coulda sworn i read this some time ago and didnt review! ack...well i want to say this was a really kawaii short fic! not too long, not boring, enough details and diologe (or however u spell it P) plus it was a TAKARI! haha.. i really enjoyed it. thankz for writting it! on my favezz...

I read this, probably, months ago and don't know why I didn't review then. Then started having problems and I totally lost the contact for this fic, and it was just a couple of minutes that I remembered it out of the blue. I guess I'm lucky that I remembered your pen name because I wouldn't have wanted to never read this again. It's a very good piece of lit that you conjured up here. True pure fluff but that's not bad at all. Everyone has those moments that all they want to read is fluff (or maybe just me O.o). Anyway, that's about it. Great story, very cute .

BTW, about other Takari's out there, read "The Porcelain Angel" by The Raven. It is worth the read, trust me!

~Cracker

Awwwwwwww... This was very cute. I'll admit it wasn't your best fic, but it was still pretty good. I don't think the kiss scene really fit in though; it seemed a bit hasty, like you didn't know how else to make it a romance. If you took it out, it would make a nice Takari friendship fic. Anyways... the best Takari I've ever read was 'The Way Things Happened, Honestly' by lucia marin - a great piece of introspection from both TK and Kari's point of views.

Takari is so boring that the only takari I've read and liked so far is Rb's "Floating wings".Nice try,but I can't actually see the kiss scene.I liked the conversation about the digi-eggs and their characters.

This is a good Takeru/Hikari piece. It's short, relatively simple, and suprisingly sweet. It's fluff. But it's not cheesy fluff. It avoids the overly cliche - "Hey, Kari? I love you." "Oh, I love you too, T.K.!" It's a nice relief. The kiss was a nice way to get everything across. And it was cute. Other than that, there's not much to say about this fic, only that it should be read by ANY Takeru/Hikari fan, mild or hardcore. 4*/5* Really, I was really suprised by this. I expected this to be characteristic Iloveyou/Iloveyouback/happy ending thing. And it was. But everything cheesy was between the lines and thus made uncheesy (that sentence was cheesy... yeah...) Anyway, don't be so hard on yourself. This was good. And the kiss scene WAS cute. Any questions, comments, or complaints, email to

That was a good story, even for a very short Takari. I didn't think it was boring, I think it was great story. But my opinion is different than others 'cause I'm odd. Anyways, that was good and I'm happy that you didn't expect too much from people. That was a fluffy Takari, and I like fluffy Takaris. It was cute, because you really captured the characters behavior. Well, good luck on your other stories! ~*Princess of Knowledge*~

SWEET!

you know kari's birthday? eh, err i thought it was a good little story, nice

That was mighty boreing. Sorry. I've tried to like Takari but I can't get into it. DAIKARI 4 EVA! Gomen... _*

Very original, exceedingly well written. You find this boring? lol