Please please please continue?! X3

I really hope they rejoin each other soon.

I am still waiting in baited breath for the conclusion. Please...!

um... i noticed you have not updated in forever, but I decided to leave a comment anyways... this is a very good story, with a very interesting concept... hopefully you will update, if not, just keep writing!

oh your so so cruel to end it like this..

hm..

update son PLEASE.

*Nudges* Pst, hey. You really need to update this fic. I mean, seriously. It's really not nice to leave me hanging here. It's so enthralling... I have to know what happens or I may implode. It's been a while since your last update, so... feed the readers! We're hungry little critters. Wake up Duo, wake up! Live again!

I like your story alot. I can't wait for the next chapter. I really hope everything works out... I don't usually read stories with character death in them, because I usually don't liek them. But i like your story so far. Anyway please update soon!

*whines* hurry up and update already, ur killin' me here! i love the story...and please don't make duo stay dead *cries*

*click added to favs* Sadly I have just found this fic but better later than never. Very interesting character portrayal I’m not used to reading them this way but it fits and I like. *bounce* The storyline is creative and I love the morbid/cynical writing styles in certain areas. I have fallen in love with this fic and I hope I will be able to read more soon. I enjoy the strangeness to it all; makes me think and I like that. Driving your readers crazy just shows how good a chapter was. - Hopefully more will come soon. *bribes with chocolate* BWAHAHA!

~Ganki

I really liked this chapter. Your writing style is so unique... different from most of the stuff I've read. I really like it. Keep up the good work.

first of all... damn but i love your heero. your story rocks major ass, mostly because it manages to be emotional and interesting without any sap or bullshit. your characters are also spot-on (that seems really british, but w/e). i also love how you can tell that duo is smart, and not in a dry, intellectual way, but through application. fuck i love this! whe!

Crazy.

This is the best I have for your story. Not bad, just in a strange way different. Different from other stories. Different from my expectations.

I didn't read part 6. I read 1 to 5. The first two were a union. It was about Duo and his zooming-out. I think he was close to a burn out. It was just Duo, and about his world. These two parts were a fine piece of art.

The next three were just story. It was okay. The normal type of text that you read in story fanfics. Lots of action.

And the last part ... It fits, in a way. Was it time for another change? But the reader got accustomed to the story type. And you didn't continue.

My question: Is this YOU writing, or do you have a plan?

(Sorry if you don't understand. I'm German and I write a "free" English. lol)

Ah! Nu... you ended it there? I wanna see poor Heero's reaction. And damnit, Duo, you better make the right decision, you doof bag. XD

I love the dry commentry of Duo's POV, it seems very.. him, and it made me smile all the way through, such black humour he has! N. I hope you do update soon, as I want to know where this going, and yeah. And randomly: Yum, Solo.

sad. *sniff* plz plz continue! i beg! LOL.

Very nice job. There were a few grammar[spelling really] errors but they were few and far between, so I wouldn't worry bout them. I actually just read all five chapters ; and I really like this story. Yet another story to check on T.T[Its a love and hate kinda thing]. I'm impressed with your writing skills. You have talent, that's for sure. Maybe there will be another chapter soon? oo I'm not trying to nag, I promise, I just like this story and wish to read more. _ Uh, I don't have any ideas at the moment[Train wreck of thought] but if I think of anything I'll be sure to suggest it. Good job!