This was really interesting to read, especially because i've never actually read Hercules in a fic. I think you got both their personalities perfectly and I really like your writing style and the descriptions you used. You have a great sense of when to put in something humorous to lighten the mood a little. Plus, I just liked the idea. Awesome job! (favorites)

That was a very well writen story. I enjoyed reading it a lot.

I had never even thought of the idea that Cloud and Herc would just talk. A very good idea indeed.

Good work! Keep writing!

Cute. Very well-written. I'm glad you didn't make it Herc/Cloud, as that would have ruined a very good scene.

I like the characterizations of both of them: Hercules the amiable, muscle-bound geek, Cloud the quiet, warm-hearted 'killer'. Not a pair you'd think to see in a room together, having a conversation.

My favorite line: "[D]on't you *know*? I was hired to *kill* you." Very funny, especially since Hercules was like, "Well, yeah..." The "knocking over buildings" line was funny, too.

Enjoyable read; good job! Have a great week, ja ne!

Hey! This rocks! I "actually /like/" this also... neato. Great idea hey. Good writing style as well... descriptions, ways of putting things... I don't know. Just, it's great, I love it! Ahem: I like! a lot. (my signature way of putting that I like something... if ya knew me on you'd understand)

Sorry for all randomness hey. I'm a... random person. But for your purposes I suppose, all ya need to know is that this is a fic which I actually like. A lot!

~AquilaStrife (

I really enjoyed this; it's quite refreshing to see Hercules himself included in a bit of fanfiction, and the pair as friends were written quite well. Well-done.

Aaw...I really like this fic. Herc is one of my fave characters in Disney and Cloud in Square. XD I really like the thought of them being friends, but I don't like a yaoi pairing. Well done is only thing I can say.

Nice job. I think you hit both of there personalities perfectly.

i liked it! you should write a follow-up to it...this was excellent! (and cloud's sexy .

Well done :D I love the idea of Herc and Cloud talking together.

*o* Aww. Herc/Cloud would be an interesting pairing, I suppose... _ Especially, well...you know... Considering the way he was...handling him before the Cerberus fight at the Coliseum. -.- Heh. Anyway, cute ficlet. I know how it is to be in a writing slump, so - glad you're pulling yourself out a bit.

Peace out.

-daea-