Neato.

Hm. Well, I don't think I can say anything that hasn't already been said - this is really well done...it captures Katsuya's character in more depth than usual. He has a lot of ambivalence towards Tatsuya that often gets glossed over in fics.

The last line is especially effective. VERY well done indeed.

Aww man that was real, It was believable and made sense with the plot... though how I wish Maya would choose Katsuya over Tatsuya.. he's just more, tolerable and more mature. In fact tiss sad.. The whole series why dose it always have to be sad. Shin Megami Tensei Games why? Anyhow.. I like it because I know deep down that Tatsuya really likes Maya from Innocent Sin though he's feelings run deep with everyone except his brother though he's so blinded with his pride he just wouldn't accept it. I'm glad to see them coherent with each other, more like accepting, What.. why Do I always find fanfictions so late! Kudos.

I loved this fic, Katsu-kun rules .

Yay, a Katsuya fic! There aren't enough of those out there!

I almost cried when I first read this, it was so depressing. I read it a bit before I finished the game (my friend and I were at the Sumaru Castle and taking a gaming break) and I thought this fic represented the reality of the game's ending.

When I saw the real ending, I just remembered this fic and I thought, "wow! Reading that fic actually made me feel like the game had a happy ending!" XD I mean that in a good way, though. Your fic really got to me, nagged the inside of my brain, chewed at my heart. I couldn't stop thinking about it. _ Katsuya is my favorite character (he's EVERYONE'S favorite character, come on) and the thought of him ending up like this tortured me for days. Since then I've tried to combat the misery and angst by starting my own fic where some semi-decent stuff happens to the poor guy. Oh, and by collecting smutty doujinshi. XD Mwahahaha.

I think all this means, "Even though I don't usually like angst all that much, your work is really great, keep writing please. The world needs more P2 fic that doesn't suck." (Uh, just apply that to all your other fics too, I'm too lazy to review them separately.)

Oh, bless you. The world needs more Persona fic, particularly good fic like this. So... it pulls at familiar memories, and the description makes it real. Very good.

Awwww. _ I'm so glad to find good Persona fic! And Kat to boot! This fic makes me want a Kat plushie. Thanks! _

Good story. Katsuya's my favorite character.

Good Story!

This DEFINITLY fits the Persona storyline. Everything is detailed just like game it self. It's Dark, Twisted, Truthful, and reality at a Persona type finest. Good work.

Whoo-hoo! Great job, this is a really cool fic. Everything about it was so interesting. Eeeee, I wish I had written it! You're so amazing with the details.

That was great.(I'm a Katsuya fan. )Everything semms to...fit. (So well detailed.)

very good...more please

Katsuya...ahh. I love this. I always get the feeling that Katsuya feels so left out, and so alone. I think this is so appropriate and well thought-out to the way Katsuya's life took the direction it did. It's a vivid (and very well-described, especially the food! *drool*) and fitting piece to describe the stuff that the game never actually told us, but left us to assume. Mess is rock and roll. Yeey.