| Reviews for Fragile |
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  Guest chapter 7 . 3/27/2018 Dear KawaiixCherryxBlossom... I've read this story for the first time about ten years ago, maybe more. And still, from time to time, I like to come back to it. This is so well written! The way you describe Misty's feelings is so moving and on point! I love how instead of diving deep into pokemon related stuff, you simply use already well established and loved characters, to tell the deeply personal and story focused on feelings of Ash and Misty. You proboably will never even see this comment, but still, even after all these years, your story deserves to be praised. Thank you! |
 jeannot1978 chapter 1 . 6/17/2014 So, Ash is losing his density? Very interesting... |
| Ashmn chapter 5 . 5/10/2014 That was an extremely short chapter |
| Ashmn chapter 3 . 5/10/2014 Feels, feels everywhere |
| Ashmn chapter 2 . 5/10/2014 ...shiiiiiiiiiiit :/ Im really enjoying this to be quite honest with you, deals with real world problems. |
| Ashmn chapter 1 . 5/10/2014 Fuckin strayaaaaaaaa |
| Liquid Nitrous chapter 4 . 4/10/2013 Misty, well isn't fat. I don't understand anorexia, but isn't it when people feel like their fat, when their not? They don't realise that it's UNHEALTHY to be able to see your ribs when you look at your stomach. Being skinny, but healthy is when you can see muscle on your stomach, or at least for me. *tries to sound like the anime narrator* "Will Misty realise that she has a problem? Will she let Ash help her? Tune in next time!" |
| Liquid Nitrous chapter 2 . 4/10/2013 Misty has anorexia doesn't she? |
| Liquid Nitrous chapter 1 . 4/10/2013 Haha! The Gold Coast! I'd love to go there, but I'm stuck in Melbourne! Although, I must point out: NO real world places exist in the Pokémon World, only Kanto, The Orange Islands, The Sevii Islands, Johto, Hoenn, Sinnoh and Unova, as well as any new regions that get made in the future |
| arnythedonut chapter 5 . 2/20/2013 Great story! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/28/2012 wow :D |
| Pipluplover169 chapter 7 . 6/24/2012 My god, this one made me cry... It's so sad... D: But, at the same time, so very beautiful... I absolutely love it. |
| lanternheart chapter 7 . 8/4/2011 I was waiting for the moment that they would kiss :) Oh thank god that she had her clothes, because in hospitals they put you in those gowns, and your... Um... Bottom... Shows O.o |
| lanternheart chapter 3 . 8/4/2011 Misty, you are so dead XD |
| lanternheart chapter 1 . 8/4/2011 I don't watch Pokémon alot, but I love the show. Hmmm, I've always thought DawnxAsh was the best pairing, but this seems awesome too :D |
