Reviews for Darling Girl
Katelaina chapter 3 . 10/18/2014
Really wish you would update this fic, it is a gem. Also hope Severus finds respect for James, yes when they were kids he bullied him but he gave his live to protect a child of snape which proves he grew up a good man, also Snape was not innocent in their fights either - they were both kids and kids can be stupid. However Snape bulllying Harry all those years proves he was in a way a lesser man for taking his anger out on an innocent. Hope Snape will be a good father for 'Harry' and realise his mistakes.
Joe chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
This is an interesting idea. I hope you continue.
turtledonkey27 chapter 3 . 7/21/2013
oh no, you're not going to just leave us here are you? I want to know who overheard and how they pull off the switch and all that. it's a good plotline.
Larisya chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
Now THAT is evil. Changing the poor lytling's gender. Poor, poor little childing.
EmilyJadeForbesMontgomery chapter 3 . 10/11/2011
please make a another chapter
blah blah blah chapter 3 . 4/11/2011
You've got some information confused. If "harry" was premature, that would mean he was born BEFORE his due date, technically making him older. What your doing is trying to make Harry younger to making him get into a younger grade. That would mean he would have been 'overdue', meaning he didn't come out until after the due date. (and i dont know any sane woman who would wait two months over their due date to have the kid, most people would have themselves induced into labor.)
darkplayer35 chapter 3 . 7/27/2010
Awesome start to the story. I look forward to reading more. I like how you have made several different changes to help pass Lilith off as a different person unlike many others. Please update soon.
Riniko22 chapter 3 . 7/6/2010
Quite a different story. Does this change Lilith's access to Harry's access to the Potter vaults or does she still retain this as a inheritance from James? How will she feel about boys/girls now that all that she has grown up conditioned to think as been turned upside down? She should also be careful about how her old friends are added back to her life, it would be easier if Gennie or Luna be seen as the ones to bring her into the group of friends. As 5th years they are in the same classes.
bookivore chapter 3 . 5/19/2010
Just found this story. I love the idea of mixing Severitus with female Harry. Don't know if you needed Ginny to be off on vacation with Hermione but *shrug*. I'd like to see how Har* Lilith handles dealing with people who are hostile and/or can't be told the secret, she seems a little too relaxed with Hermione & Ginny - it would be nice if she were showing some stress rather than all oh, yeah, my eyesight is better now and let's plot to fool the whole world, but first let's have lunch.

Note canon Harry Potter is very reactive, he is capable of amazing things but almost all are reactions to being pushed into a corner. Lilith is coming across as being a different person with all this planning.
Dumbledork chapter 3 . 3/9/2010
Very nice story.
Griffin Raven chapter 3 . 12/28/2009
Wow...what a truly awesome and novel idea for a story with a few twists thrown in for good measure! I can't wait to find out who overheard the conversation between Hermione, Ginny and Lilith on there way to the great hall? I think the gender switching potion and spells, did a lot more than just alter Lilith's physical make-up into "Harry" - it must have also worked on some level so that spells to determine parentage were deceived and only showed James & Lily (not the true parents of Severus & Lily)...wow so complicated! So Lilith/Harry must have gotten some of "James Potter's" personality otherwise where did the child get its impulsiveness, rushing headlong into danger...well at least according to Severus, Minerva. In truth I think when young Harry rejoined the wizarding world and learned of his status and what the rest of the magical world believed of him - Harry acted as they perceived a hero should act. Hence the hero was sorted into Gryffindor. But if Harry or rather Lilith were to act more true to her nature she'll be sorted into Slytherin, and perhaps much better academically at her studies. As both Severus and Lily were very bright students.
ballet fairy chapter 3 . 12/26/2009
please continue its awesome!
Kage Hasu chapter 3 . 12/8/2009
who was the shadowy figure? He/She isn't going to cause trouble for Lilith are they? Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon.
Lai.Lilian.Potter chapter 3 . 11/28/2009
Hi,

I absolutely love this story. I can't wait to see how the rest of the Wizardind World are going to react to lilith. What will Voldie's reaction to his Potions Professor having a daughter be? Ooh I just can't wait! Please update soon?

Thanking you :-]

.Potter x~x~x
Flying Chrissy chapter 3 . 11/24/2009
Interesting story looking forward to the next update.
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