I love any fanfic with the bruenette man-candy that are Methos & Xander but together it's epic!

Wow this story was amazing! I'm truly sorry for all the times that I saw it, but decided not to read it. I was just going to check out the reviews, and then I accidentally clicked on the story itself. Since the first chapter was now up on my screen, I figured what the hell might as well read a few paragraphs and see how the story is...AM I GLAD I DID.

Not only is this story well written, but I loved how you managed to add Methos and Cassandra so perfectly with the Buffy world. Great job!

great story

thank you for writing truly kick ass story the writers of buffy could learn a lot from you. Thanks and bye.

I loved it am moving on to the next stroy cant wait to read it.

Awsome fic _

Droo lI love faith and Xander so much, that was such a cute chapter:)

first of all I enjoyed reading your story!

criticism

-in my opinion it would have benn nice to give Faith and Xander more than only one day to get to know each other again (they both have change a lot) bevor it goes to SunnyD

-the training fight between Xander and Methos was a littel to much for me. After i read the end it was clear why you needed him to bee so strong, but now he is so powerfull. He will win every challange from a normal immortal or wouldt he?

critial reveiw.

your story was good but please don't write stories in the present tense, frankly it's annoying.

That said i hope you write a sequel

CH1

It's best to write in the past tense. Writing in the present tense is only

done for first person narrative.

I've never bought the 'had to pretend to be dead' bit for the Sunnydalers.

It just doesn't fit with the BTVS series. Approaching his friends during the

day holding a cross would prove he wasn't a vamp. Hell he could call

Willow and have her cast a spell checking to see if he was alive or not.

At any rate they would have done everything they could, including

magic, to make sure he was dead, not just accept a police report.

CH2

I find myself asking 'How did they find him?'.

CH3

Good ending.

CH4

Very good ending. Very workable intro for Faith.

CH5

That covers any questions I had about how they found him.

Faith's reaction to his extreme healing doesn't really fit. She's

already seen his grave and can sense something off about him.

She should know something is up. His demonstration was

probably the stupidest thing he could have done. LOL!

CH6

Very cute.

CH7

Would Tara be wandering out alone at night?

CH8

"Of course I have a cosmetology license. I've had one since the sixties. I had

lost a bet one day and I had to learn to be a hair dresser. After getting one I

figured no one would go out looking for Methos the hairdresser so it is a skill

I keep up to date."

LOL! That actually fits.

Cute bit between Xander and Faith. Very Waffy.

I like the way the disguises worked. Smooth.

CH9

"Wing it!" She whispers sharply to him. "What do you mean wing it!"

LOL! Xander does tend to do that a lot doesn't he.

Great fight scene and one hell of an ending.

CH10

Great character work on Faith.

CH11

Great fight scene.

CH12

The bit with Darius was really cryptic.

"I'm sorry the mental image of both you and Buffy showering must have overloaded

my senses." He says grinning.

LOL!

CH13

Everyone forgetting was really lame. Sure it makes things easier for

the author, but it really screws up the story because there was no

real logic to it, just something the author willed not connected to the

reality he was writing.

CH14

Nice bit with Faith.

Well i just finished this story, Leaves of grass. It was amazing! And not just because it was a Xander and Faith fic, but because of your original plot, wonderful portrayal of the characters, and amazing writing style. I loved that Xander became an immortal and that Cassandra and Adam were such loving and perfect parental figures. And I also loved them for their individual personalities and strengths too. Not just because of Xander.

I loved that you had Xander learn, and train to be stronger and a better fighter. That he was not suddenly this great fighter. It was not only more realistic, but much more enjoyable to read.

I loved the relationship you wrote between Xander and Faith. The trust it showed, the growing caring and friendship. It was wonderful to read. I also liked you explanation for what happened to Faith. It was nice, and I really liked that Buffy too had figured it out. It made me like Buffy more, and not have any anger towards her that I often feel when reading Xander and Faith fics.

Your fight scenes were among the best I have ever read. Very descriptive, realistic, and well written. You described everything in wonderful detail that was easy to read and understand. And it was also in a poetic sort of way, with out being to flowery or word-y. Wonderful job!

You also did a wonderful job in catching the unique personalities of the Scooby’s. You caught all their quirks, and mannerisms. Their relationships were( once again ) very realistic and you captured the dynamics that made this show a huge 7 season hit. Congratulations to you.

I have never watched highlander, yet I had no problem understanding or imaging what you wrote. And now I feel the burning urge to go out and rent the movies, before I try to watch every episode of the show available. I am looking forward to continue to explore that world, so thank you for introducing it to me.

I look forward to reading more of your work,

hey really cool story i just finished reading it im really looking forward to the sequel the teaser looks VERY promising :P please keep up the work

*Gawks* Yes, I gawk at you. I've read this story in aobut two days, because well I have no life. I have never seen Highlander, the show or the movie, so I don't know why I decided to read it. Probably because it was Xander-centric.
Its an amazing fic, and I can't wait to read the sequel. The teaser to which is the reason I gawk at you. He's evil? That's just too much. Oh man, I'm gonna go for a walk, then start the second story.
Oh man.

The Desert eagle is not a .45 caliber weapon, it can be chambered for the .357, the .40, and the fifty calibers.

The .357 has an eight round clip, the forty a seven, and the fifty a six, each can carry one in the chamber as well.

The most common .45 caliber handgun is the Colt 1911A1, using .45 caliber ACP rounds

Good God! that's an unfair teaser if you don't continue it, I'll I'll I'll do something to you so there :P