I loved it! I need to know how it ends! Please keep writing, we're waiting for you! Why did you stop?

I really hople you'll continue this story someday

Continue this story right now or you're grounded from internet. For 10 years.

Please:)

I just read both From the Ashes and Chasing Redemption - it would be a HUGE understatement to say they both are the best books I have ever read:) I noticed that it was last updated like 9 years ago... OMG HOW DOES IT END? I really really hope you write the next chapters and have not given up.

Please update soon for the sake of our sanity, I don't know how much longer I can wait!:D

Oh one last question - If you did finish it, did you continue it on a different website? If so what one?

This is very intriguing story! I see its been a lot from last update time, but if youll decide to continue it that would be really great.

To be posted 9 July 2010 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critic’s Two Cents.

I will tag those I liked as pick of the week. Check at StarwarsKnights for the best of the best.

Originally reviewed 2 Dec 2005 at kotorfanmedia, that review is below

Post KOTOR: Direct sequel to the author’s From the Ashes .

The style is still excellent, and the segue from sad memorial for a fallen enemy to arrest by special operations troops is well done. The readers on Kotorfanmedia gave it ten thumbs up. Add mine to it.

Reprise Pick of the Week

Hello,

I know it's been years since you last updated this and you probably won't finish it anymore but I just want to say that I really enjoyed reading this. Min Avery (whether she ends up with Carth or Canderous, in your other fic) makes the LSF Revan character come alive for me. She, with her struggles, quirks and experiences of humanity makes her a character that someone can easily get attached to. You've written her extremely well. I loved your realistic portrayal of her relationships with the other characters, especially with Carth.

I can tell that you've put a lot of love into your stories and I'd like to thank you for sharing it with us.

If you ever decide to continue this, I'll be one of the first to read. :)

I really hope you might update this someday, because the fic is totally awesome, one of the best ones ever. This fic will always have a place in my heart. :)

I'm wondering if you're going to complete this story. i noticed after i had almost finished it that it was written wat back in 04. If i had know that, coupled with the fact that it was uncompleted, i may not have bothered to read it. I'm glad i did because i'm impressed with the unique story line that has developed before KotOR II was released. i noticed also that you have written a few stories this year and i urge u to consider finishing this one. I like how you've portrayed the character of Min and it will be interesting to see how Carth makes her fal in love with him again.

Another thing is Dustil and Mission. I am very much intrigued about their integration into the story especially as Mission is two years older and full of mischief.

When u first introduced the assassins, i almost thought they were the Yuuzhan Vong threat that Revan had gone to fight out in Unknown Space (some people insist was the True Sith that she went to fight, but from my knowledge and study of the Yuuzhan Vong invasion and the similarities of circumstances, I'm inclined to believe that the YV and the Sith are one and the same. Even if they aren't, u have to admit it is an interesting theory).

I'm very glad u brought Yuthura into the fold. And making Jolee a member of the Jedi Council was brilliant and just asking for trouble. um... there was something i wanted to mention... now i can't remember.

I'm glad that you haven't portrayed Malak as a 'bad guy' completely. It's nice to see that he has been given some very good qualities and such. Nice to know that he could have been redeemed like Revan and wasn't pure evil.

I'm not much for critism, even constructive critism, even though i've found that a lot of authors value it. I simply don't find anything blindly wrong with your story. So all i have to say is good job and even though it's been a long time, i'm sure the readers of fanfiction would appreciate it if you finished it.

love ya and leave ya!

Again, I think this story is really well done. Interesting take on the story. I'll keep following this one...

Keep it up!

Just read both "From the Ashes" and "Chasing Redemption". You're amazing. Seriously, Min is such a well-developed character... it's really great to read. I know you haven't updated it for nearly a year now, but if you ever wanted to write more, I'd be very eager to read it.

Wow..so very interesting! It's just something about sequels that just make you happy inside when you know what the characters are talking about. Going to read more, and still hoping that you'll finish this! _

Must say I loved the conclusion of the last story and now, obviously have moved on to the sequal. I am rather disappointed though that it seems to be over a...year since you last updated this, even though I know you may let this story to continue it's limbo existance, I beg that you revive it.

Anyway more about the chapter, I think it's great and logical that you have the Republic have a super elite unit, makes the espionage lover in me so happy. Well I'm going to read the rest and review, in hopes that maybe my feeble reviews shall inspire you! It seems like too many of the great writers on this site never finish their great stories. I shall read with enjoyment till the non-complete end however!

Oh, this is really good! I loved "From the Ashes" - it was fantastic! Please keep going and update soon!

I like this story...