I'm glad to see a happy ending... considering how much death was going on the first part of the story, I'm guessing you're not the type to pull any punches when it comes to death...you wrote a really good crossover (which I don't always come across) and I really loved the touching father-daughter scene at the end... simply lovely.

I'm glad to see some of the PMK characters though it saddens me that most are already dead... ESPECIALLY Okita... he's my fave character and it pains me to know no matter how much the story progressed (I'm referring to the actual manga not your story, btw) he's gonna die young T_T

Overall, good work, keep it up. _

and a happy ending! thank goodness!

I got a little confused bewteen Rei and Ran/Ichiro at times, probably because I read most of this story in the office and didn't take the time to come up with a visual for them.

but I like Midori a lot, and overall, this story was pretty cool.

LOL! Yukiko thinks Soujirou's her son? I love it! "She just made me a shirt!" that's so cute! how perfect would it be if Seta soujirou really was Okita Souji's kid? Nice fight scene in the last chapter by the Way, and I absolutely LOVE how Okita meets mostly-dead-Saitou's spirit in the old soba shop. that's my favorite scene so far. this story is brilliant after all.

"Saitou can almost feel the souls of his long dead comrades passing by. ...Gazing in through the darkened windows, he caught a glimpse of his past"

wow, what a cool idea! Gave me a shiver.

Okina's death was sweet rather than overly depressing.

and good job trying to reconcile PMK and RK Saitou a bit by giving Midori the ability to see spirits.

OH! so that's who this 'Ran' character is. thanks for finally spelling it out.

And I see that since poor Souji is already dead, you have taken it upon yourself to kill his sister. poor Mitsu, poor shrewish Mitsu! I like her a lot in the NHK taiga drama. oops, digression. ahem.

the story's really good- it's definitely keeping me interested. Poor soujirou and okina... too weak to be cheeky with women? doesn't sound like there's much hope.

I'm suddenly hating you again. This story has me more mood-swingy than poor Kaoru! but at least you DIDN'T kill Yahiko.

and maybe I was wrong about the young man with grudge and the silver wolf. hmm. I thought perhaps Suzu had gotten over his thing with the cats and found something more dangerous and with more Miburo symbolism. anyway, even if he's not suzu, i'm still curious to see who he is.

oh, whoa... you know something crazy? this just might be my favorite fic of yours yet! I am so intrigued! I think I know who it is with the silver wolf and the niichan, heh heh heh. it's crazy that I'm liking this, but, wow, I'm really liking this.

GAH! what the heck is the matter with you? dang it, i've got a very heavy three-hole-punch here on my desk and I want very badly to beat you over the head with it! gah... at least you had Saitou adopt Eiji.. I rather liked that kid. Who you just slaughtered for no good reason, grr...

This is dreadfully depressing. And yet, I'm going to sit here and read the rest of it.

Aw... I liked this story! It was so tragic and dark etc... yet at the same time, I felt touched and moved and... overwhelmed. Yet at the same time, I felt that the flow wasn't all that good. I still like your humour fics better. But this was still really good.

Awesome story, really great how you managed to combine the two series. Also it being saitou centric is good, constantly reading kenshin-kaoru fluff is starting to irritate me, and he is also one of the more intruiging characters in the series. Hope to read more of your stories in the future, keep it up

Awesome fic, awesome job, I applaude you. *Claps* truely amazing!

that was such a cool story

that was a great ending, it was too bad that Tokio had to die in the beginning, well at least Midori was still there for him. that was awesome.

Oh, Oh, Oh, please don't leave us hanging, this is a great story, I want to see if Saitou really lives. I can't wait for chapter 16.

you are so mean leaving us hanging like that, this is a really great story and I can't wait until you finish it.