There was something about this, bot the title "If You Asked Them" and the heart of this little dialouge that reached out and grabbed me, I liked a lot of these lines, even the ones that made me sad.

"If you asked Sirius he’d say: The feel of the cold and the sound of isolation.

If you asked why, he’d say: Because then you know you’re safe."

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"If you asked Sirius he’d say: The feel of my hair against my skin and the sound of my best friend’s breathing.

If you asked why, he’d say: Because my parents can’t control it."

In so short a space you said so much, some with silence, or the unspoken or unexplained...it was beautifully done. Keep writing thats for sure nees writers like you.

good poem, somthing we can all relate to.

*sob* its really sad... but touching as wel...*sob*

this was very good to read,

it made me think whilst i read it, i then had to read it again afterwards it was very good

orlin_

Sad, but very good...

very powerful.

amazingly written

Wow. This was kind of morbid. It was dark and creepy, but really deep. I liked it.