| Reviews for On the Line |
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   Mako-clb chapter 2 . 7/21 I know you drew it out for dramatic tension, but I don't think Yusuke would have fought Kurama that much. But, I did like that Kurama knew right away that they didn't know the dead girl. That was a nice touch. |
| Mako-clb chapter 1 . 7/21 This caught my eye. I can't wait to see what you do with this story. |
| etm chapter 1 . 12/28/2017 encantada the maiden here. you just deserve not only a good read but also a good writer as well |
| cheng chapter 7 . 9/5/2015 Mah babies! 3 I love them! This was great! |
| AwakenDreams chapter 1 . 12/21/2012 Love it! |
| seireidoragon chapter 7 . 9/29/2012 Great story! |
| WriterFreak001 chapter 1 . 7/3/2011 LOVE THIS STORY! WRITE MORE TO IT PLEASE! |
| WolfDaughter chapter 3 . 4/12/2007 Hey, just wanted to drop you a quick note. I'm really enjoying your story, but there's a couple of things I felt should be pointed out as they tend to distract from the story. At least for me, they do. :-) Anyway, it's things like "starred" instead of "stared", "winched" instead of "winced", and "shined" instead of "shone." |
| TK chapter 7 . 1/9/2006 I really enjoy reading "On the Line". Though I want Keiko and Yusuke to kiss. Once or twice because the way you describe how they felt for each other but couldn't. Whenever I thought they were about to kiss. The word "baka" (idiot) come to place. I guess I really want to them kiss. That alright. I like the story a lot. Thank you _ |
| Anime's-mistress chapter 7 . 12/12/2005 Wow that was an awesome story and absolutely perfect job. |
| matchynishi chapter 7 . 12/10/2005 I'd missed the ending of the fic somehow - I liked how you didn't have everything A-okay so soon... Keiko being a bit down was very natural, and Yuusuke's snowball fight was very much in character. XD Great fic! :) |
| QT102 chapter 7 . 12/3/2005 YEA! that was a really good story! perfect job! |
| Kittysand Katie chapter 7 . 11/26/2005 I was pleasantly surprised by the style of your ending: Most people have very happy and sugary endings, but yours kept the somewhat dark undertone of the whole story. I really liked it. I hope you write another Yusuke/Keiko story soon: You're a great writer. |
| Animefouryou chapter 7 . 11/25/2005 Wow Yusuke got Keiko to laugh talk again go Yusuke great ending to a great story add a squeal add more now now and hurry thanks jessica |
| Tensa-Zangetsu102 chapter 5 . 9/4/2005 nice one i especially like the part when Yusuke teaches that creep, Yamato Miyazaki a lesson of what happens when you mess with Yusuke Urameshi's friends, especially his girlfriend. |
