nicely writen

This is already awesome. I love when Nny is all childish, kinda suits him.

I liked it.

AMAZING!one best.

That was kinda cute and funny. Brotherly love between Squee and Johnny was great.

Well done. The characters are portrayed very accurately. The story would fit perfectly with the series. I love your interpretation of Johnny and Squee's relationship.

This was sorta cute, sad, and gave me homicidal tendencies...-_-

Imma go finish off those kids and maybe Squee's parents...*goes off on murder spree*

XD

Shadow

Did this fic used to be on DeviantArt? Because I remember reading it YEARS ago, and, this is still one of the best JTHM fics I've ever read! I'm so glad I found it again! It's believable, and so well-written! You are an AMAZING writer! :D

So, wait. This takes place before Johnny meets Satan? Huh...That would explain how how Johnny isn't surprised by Squee knowing Pepito and Satan.

Very good! And hooray! Squee had a somewhat good day on my birthday! Yay! :)

Since I found JTHM and Squee, I don't sleep. I pretend to, then leave my house. On Tuesdays, I hide under my desk with a large kitchen knife. And I swear to god I have seen Pepito. I screamed, my favorite thing to do. I have to keep up the act of a prep, I hate it, but I have to. It is the one night I allow myself to doze, I think I may have nightmares from this story. THANK-YOU! That was not sarcasm, I truly like nightmares. It is better then the deep blackness I see. Or having the Devil arrive to scare the fucking shit out of you. *looks at can.* I don't think this is a soda. I feel hyper. Maybe I am going to go annoy someone. I just need to stay out of Nny's territory. I had to run like a madman was on my heels. There was one. *Waunders off.* Fuck! I moved to far to the right! SHIT!

I really enjoyed this. I loved how you portrayed Johnny and Squee. :) You did a great job of keeping them in character. I could probably list a whole bunch of things I loved about this fic, but I won't because it's late and I need to go to bed. :) But I am favoriting this.

That tasted wonderful. I mean this seriously, I have the warm fuzzies now. It was bondy and cute and protecty and dark and wonderful in the way only something like this can be. EMOTIONAL VOMIT WAS DELICIOUS.

Well that was amazing. I like that you can make Johnny Squee's protector, but still keep him insane and not entirely in the right. This is essentially how things are in the canon, though you make it a little lighter, and that is exactly what overjoys me (the almost-canon-ness, though I also enjoy the lightening).

PS: I was mistaken before, this fic is completed. I was overjoyed when I found this out and I'll be reading the rest now.

Wonderlovely! I heard this thing is dead, but I really hope you'll update again because even one chapter has me entranced. This is exactly like JtHM, but ever so slightly expanded. It's kind of amazing.

So yeah, GIMME MORE YOU ARE AMAZING