i just read your story and I have to say that I really enjoyed it. i think you have done a amazing job and i hope that you are going to continue this story. please say that you are. I look forward to reading more. awesome job.

i am absolutely loving this fic!

I just don't get how they could easily forgove her so quickly it seems so unreal to me..

are there going to be any more updates? this is a great story and i've gotten really into it, it would be a shame to not write more.

awesome story! I love it! :D

please update SOON! :)

Oh, you just CAN'T leave it like this! Please, please, please tell me you intend to finish this. I have to know what happens next. I love the relationship between Storm and Matty(my favorite) and am eager to know what happens between him and his mom. Update soon.

This story is absolutely wonderful. I like the movie but always felt there was something missing in the story. You have completely made up for it by adding Storm. I hope you keep updating seeing as your last chapter was in March. If you have this posted elsewhere i would love to know where the rest of the chapters are. Keep up the good work.

I didn't even like this movie, and now I feel compelled to watch it again. I wish Storm was a character in that!

This is a very good storey, it sticks with the movie very well. I really look forward to reading more...

It made me go looking for the movie last night to no avail, ugh! I am a big fan of Vin Disel as well as Barry Pepper and so Knockaround Guys is one of my fav's, not to mention any of Vin's movies.

Can't wait to read more of your storeys, but don't leave me hanging with this one!

Cindy

I love all your stories especially this one, please update.

Yay! I'm so glad that you've updated, it's been such a long time. When I saw that you had posted a new chapter I was really happy and couldn't wait to read it. I hope you won't wait too long before posting another chapter. It's so excited, I love the character development. I also love how you're able to make the story seem so real, I can really picture Storm running away to Miami becuase things are hard. It's part of her character which you did a fabulous job develomping. Congrats! Update soon.

Wow.

loving the new chapter, been so long since you updated. loving storm so much lol.

brilliantly well written, i could see it playing out in my head like a movie, although i dont know how accurate how i picture certain characters is!

looking forward to more

since we're only allowed one review per chapter and i've already used up that one review, i have no choice but to leave you one from another chapter. so here goes... please update soon. i know for certain that i'm not the only person out there who is waiting with bated breath for there to be a chapter 16 added on to this fantastic story. You seemed to have dropped off the face of the site with no updates for a couple months now. Please do us all a favor and continue with this story. It's fabulous. Don't make us wait any longer. Good luck.

I really hope that you will keep writing this fic even though it hasn't got hundreds of reviews. The way you made the characters come to life in the stories you write is a gift, one I wished I had as you can see im not much a writer. Well one of the reasons I want this fic to keep going because I like how you make the little characters like Vanya seem like they are important, which they most likely are. Im not making much sense any more so I will say good bye.

hi im M'Kenzi i sent you the im-sorry to hear about your dog i have an 11 year old half basset half beagle i would be crushed if i lost him. your stories are realy good and i enjoy reading them if you ever get the time im me or email me its in my profile.

L8az and Sincerely,

M'Kenzi