PLease check your grammar- a lot of spelling mistakes. However, a nice story. Once again, clear it up a bit. And details, details. Remember to add a lot of descriptive words to make it more mystical and flowing.

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I like your story. It is very nice. I hope you make another Seto/Anzu story and I will support you troughout that story. yea seto/anzu live.

PS: I AM A BIG FAN OF ANZU AND ANZU/SETO,ANZU/BAKURA,ANZU/MALIK

aah so sweet! please continue! )

now that was good what will you have for us next. a Pegasus/Tea or Bokuar/Tea can't what ?