You know, I normally don't like the sad ones involving VxM, but this one...just so bittersweet. So sad

The ending just took my breath away. So beautiful, so sad.

I really liked your story - I found it because I was searching for The Visit by Chad Brock, a song I used to love.

I have to admit, when I first started reading I was amused picturing a Vash and Meryl fight about him running off on an adventure or something. Then a bit disappointed thinking this was a Mary Sue, but something about the way Meryl was 'acting' and how IC everything else was and can I say how INSANELY HAPPY I am that I kept reading? That ending was amazing. So amazing that I feel ashamed for even thinking it what I did in the middle there. So just: Bravo! Wonderful story!

Oh man did I tear up at this... I was reading the beginning with a snarky attitude, and the ending hit me so hard I cried. Beautiful. A lovely incorporation of the song into the rhythm of the story.
JK

Oh, this is so good, it makes me want to cry! My throat is all closed up, oh man!

;_; That was so sad. I kind of figured she was dead, but it didn't stop it from being poignant at the end. Especially with how she died. It really made it hit home how opressive and lonely his life was before he met her and is now that he's gone. But I enjoyed that you gave it an air of hope, with him meeting someone new. That he wasn't giving up. It was very touvhing. Good job and keep up the god work!

*cries* sniff...sniff...s-so sad! I...I can't stop crying. wh-why did you have too make dis so sad? anyways it was a tear jerker, but very well writen. so thumbs up TT_TT

That was beautiful... I really didn't see the ending coming. I was getting so mad when I thought Vash was going to hurt Meryl but... now I understand.

You're a very talented writer.

AH Hell! This is the second story of yours that has made me cry tonight. And believe me, I'm not that emotional of a person.

Very poingnant and beautifully written.

I just finished "What Might've Been" so I had to go back and read this, too. You are brilliant when it comes to manipulating emotions into something different at the end. I mean that as a compliment even if it doesn't sound like one. I spent the whole fic yelling at Vash in my head and getting progressively more frustrated with him. And then, of course, the cemetery gates close. Bloody brilliant. I love your work.

~N

Wow.

That was an AMAZING story. I REALLY loved it! So touching and such a twist at teh end. And all the time I was thinking he was being such a jerk. :) You are an incredible writer. I love your work!

Wow.. Im not sure exactly what to say. I had my suspicions that it was post-death..But even then, it hits you like a tank. Im crying my eyes out (I am such a baby..) But it's just so beautiful that he still feels the need to tell her about Sarah. That he still loves her so much.. Sheesh, I need some kleenex.

...o my God... you've shocked the hell outta me. i thought she'd be old not... this. wow. it's so sad. i love it. ja ne...

God, this story was so good that I nearly cried! ;~; I would've but I guess when I realized that Meryl was actually dead I was a little too stunned. I was wandering why she was so quiet the whole time. I was actually a little upset towards Vash for doing that to her for a while, then it suddenly dawned on me! I'm feeling a bit teary *sniff* I'll go cry now. ;~; I'll be fine, so don't worry. Please write more Trigun stuff. See ya later! ~NB~