WOW, this is soooo emotional. ;( I'm sad. Very good writing, the repetition creates a good effect. The whole thing creates a sense of her own thoughts as well.

There are no words: just, beautiful.

So beautiful... Thank you very much for such a great story. I really enjoyed it :-)

love it

So full of light, and beauty, and heart breaking sadness.

Wonderfully written. It was, as how you portrayed, the death of a Numenorean.

hello,

This is a good fic, I love the description but I think you could put more emotion into the fic

Being tired and reading this nearly made me cry. I am always impressed with your work, and I look forward to reading everything else you wrote.

beautiful. hauntingly .

Wow...that was...moving? amazing? so good! I'm adding it to my favorite stories. It was so...bittersweet...I loved it. Great job.

You JonoMagic have made my friend's lifetime, she hates Arawen. Legolas is hot

That actually made me cry. I loved the way you described Lórien. And I liked your insight into Arwen.

Really really good! And very inspiring.

i loved it...

That was so well written. I've never read a *good* story about Arwen's death, until now. It was very much in character, and I could almost see everything you described. The small mention of Lothíriel didn't go unnoticed either. :)

That was exquisite, beautiful, wonderful, and really, really sad. It made me cry! But I loved it. It is the best account of Arwen's death that I have read, ever. You make it seem so realistic. I can imagine Arwen thinking like that. You have the ability to make characters your own, all the while staying very true to Tolkien, something that is quite rare. I'm jealous!

But seriously, you are a brilliant writer. I mean it. Keep writing. Or else. ;)

Lots of hugs and chocolate

- Narwen ()