Yes! Do it again girl and she will do much more, like put your boy kissing butt straight into a coffin, Atem is Anzus' boyfriend not your's! Go Anzu, go Anzu it's your birthday, oh yeah, pound her face in uh huh.

I'm in love with what your writing I am having a hard time not reading this and wanting to know what happens next

I love this story I want Atem and Anzu to kiss at least one more time if Anzu is the one who will die it would be a perfect Romeo and Juliet story but I don't really care for sad/happy endings I love happy ending stories. Just trying to say your doing wonderful and I am thrilled to know what will happen next (please don't get the idea that I'm trying to rush you I promise I'm not).

ITACHI? pulease, sasuke is the hot one not (shudder) itachi

amazing story. can you please update this story? im dying for more

Please update the story and soon!

Please continue the story!

Please continue the story!

Wow... I thought there was some familial relation between Anzu and Akito but that was not what I expected.

Man... even though I didn't like Touko. I still feel bad for her ... but she somewhat brought upon herself (I hope she learned her lesson and be weary next time)

I...I spent a lot of time reading this...I kept thinking about this while I was eating I had dreams about it. I suggest reading it immediately. I kept thinking this would be an insanely good anime or manga! I NEED more of this!PLEASE!

I'm so glad that you don't waste a paragraph describing how beautiful or handsome each character looks. That gets boring and tiresome when writers do that so often. And this storyline is so interesting, I can't wait to continue it. The kiss was a bonus. I love Anzu's spirit. I've only started reading this and I'm hooked already. This story made me sign up for fanfiction just now so I could post the review (which is why my join date is today.) Keep up the good work!

WHAT IS THAT THE END ?
THAT'S NOT THE ENDING IS IT I HOPE NOT, I GOT MORE INTO THE STORY AT THE END OF THE STORY I HOPE YOU DID LEAVE US HANGING

AHHHH! Not a cliff hanger! And no update as of late!(no pun intended) I truly hope you finish this one. Even though I usually don't read vampire fics, I like this one... alot. The way you write the characters is fan-tucking-fastic! *snickers* I'm a sucker for a good Atem/Anzu story! And, as I've stated in other reviews and messages, I adore the way you make Atem darker! It makes me sqeal! *proceeds to do just that*. Again please finish this. I would prefer lovely written out chapters. However, I would settle for a summary of what was supposed to happen. Thank you for writing such wonderful stories!

Fangirling all over the place, Alyssa

Man your writing is amazing! i loved every second of it haha