i love this! its dark in a very poetic way and it expresses the bitterness and helplessness felt to a point of extravagance!

That was wonderful, particularly the first part with Lily.

Holy.. everything.

wow. this is MADE OF WIN. sad, but lovely.

That is beautiful. And sad...so sad. But very well done. A nice touch, with the snake in the grass. I love this pairing...

I really loved thos. Your writing and caracterization are wonderful as usual. I could feel Narcissia's angst.

wow...what can i say? beautiful, absolutely beautiful.

Brilliance. Utter brilliance.

**commences worship**

This is not a review 4 this story but 4 ur first one ever i loved it touched my heart so deeply i cant even express it the story "Forgive Me" I was looking through old stories and i found tht one i think u should repost or make some kind of sequel. It was written so beautifully. PLeaz repost or make a sequel if ur feling up 2 it of course.

~Destiny is never written in stone~

~Beleive in what you can be~

~Amethesia Celeste Serenity Aamore~