Please, please, please, please don't abandon this fic. Please continue. I want to know what happens, I am so curious. Please continue. Cheers

I just reread this story from the beginning, and it's just as enthralling the third time.

Love it.

Hey, hey, hey! it's been almost a year and you still haven't updated. I'm dying here. This story is to awesome not to finish!

Clever, unique plot! Please continue and thanks for sharing!

I really like this one. The way you weave the two storylines together is very well done - and most definately not raw! Just wanted to encourage you to keep writing because you've hooked me. Keep it up! Or I may have to find something painful to threaten you with...

Love it! Really, the writing is great and extremely captivating, the plot is just as intriguing, I have no idea where it is leading and when I read the first three chapters I was staying up much later than I was supposed to to read it, and then i read it over again. It's confusing, but delightfully so. I'm really glad you updated, and I absolutely cannot wait for the next one, so please indulge me and update soon. Thanks for the great read!

Wow.

It rings true to the show; I can see Young-Alt-Jack and Young-Alt-Daniel acting and interacting like this, and while I've never seen much Jack/Daniel subtext, you're writing it convincingly for Old-Jack as well.

You have a number of minor grammar problems, especially whose/who's. ("Whose" is possessive, like "its." "Who's" is a contraction, like "it's." Who's the guy whose ego was bruised?) It'd also be nice if you marked a little more clearly when it switched situations; I was very confused by it during chapter two.

On the whole, though, your story is very good, and I've added it to Story Alert. From what I've seen so far, it's likely to continue to be very interesting :)

I can't wait to see what happens next! I especially liked the discussion about Batman and Superman. They're right, y'know.

I love this story...

Ah! *shakes you* This update makes me most happy indeed.

More!

Please update. Your story is fantastic and I can't wait to find out what's happening.

I only just came across this story. Young Jack and Daniel, though naturally different from their mature selves, seem to behave true to their characters - or how their characters would have been at those ages. I like the juxtapostion of the current and past events, and how they seem to be coming together. I'm curious to see where it goes after chapter 3 and I hope you post more soon.

I love this entire framework - it's great how the personalities are true, even if the characters are so young in the story...

Oiooh. I first read this? On, uhm. I think it was on was it? BUT. updates. ou should do them. This story is WONDERFUl.

Oh, this is interesting :)

The story's great, both plot and writing and I'll hope it'll be a long one with lots of updates :)

Thanks for writing :D