I LOVE THE ENDING!

oh, no, james you bloody arse

nice happy ending..! James and Lily make an awesome couple! good writing!

Thanks for sharing this amazing story! Hope you continue to write long stories ;)

Aww, poor Lily... :(

I really, really dislike Edith... ugh!

Ugh, James is so ... for the lack of a better word, mean.

Brilliant, but Lily was very popular with her peers...

I absolutely adore this story! Would you write another one on the holiday in France? Love your stories :)

You have grat writing skills, but the story line? How can the marauderers not be the epitome of friendship?! One min there is a prank war and the next he loves her? I just dont get it at all.. the storyine just lacks...

I know its a way long back written story, but still! Their friendship isnt as strong, the marauderers... lily using sirius to jealous james? And sirius agreeing? Never!
And mr and mrs potter treated him like a son.. he doesnt really need to impress them...

Adored the ending! So witty and funny. Loved the final scene, so perfect. Wow what a bloody rollercoaster! You know how to write some gooooood fic! I've stayed up Really late reading it's that good! Xxx

Amazing! I was getting so angry and upset and panicked wondering how you could sort it out! I loved brave crazy lily! So devouring this story right now! Sorry I haven't stopped to review much!

Aw poor lily. I love this, it's a great different take, her being unpopular and struggling with things. I also like James just slowly havig little moments thinking about her differently

It was a good read.. Nice story! :)