Aw, this is cute!

(Malvolio shows up with an f-ing gun and starts killing people.)
WAIT.
WAIT, NO.

hamala hamala hamala hamala baaaaaaa
zoopity bapity zoopity bapity laaaaaaaaa
humanah humanah humanah humanah haaaaaaa

what? NO! VIOLA CANT DIE!

holy crap didnt expect that XD

tis cute indeed :3

and morbid hehe

... disturbing. You kind of jumped from happy go lucky to creepy... but it was well written disturbed creepiness.

Heehee. This was good. The revelry really captured the spirit of the play, with the practical jokes and teasing and manicness. I didn't expect the ending, but it fits, doesn't it? Poor, poor Malvolio.

Hee.

*twitch twitch* it had been so cute... but... *twitch twitch* now i must... FLAME YOU! CURSE YOU! THIS WAS NOT GOOD FLUFF! *runs off in tears*

Wow! So scary! You gave me the shivers all over. I love the play Twelfth Night, it's one of my favourite Shakespearean plays. This was a horrifying (though delectably excellent)continuation to the story! You pulled it off so well...and the end was so creepy (in a good way) i loved the last line! it was so gruesome! Amazing job, i commend you!

Peace,

Orit

I love this! Which is kind of bad cuz we're doing 12th Night right now, so I see the people as played by the actors...d'oh...I dont want my friend's death. No sirre...

Hiss! Flames I send at you! Flames and dinemite!

I was in a happy mood before I read this. Humph.

:) Actually I quite liked it. I kept feeling, there is something scary about this fic, but I don't know what and then Malvolio came with his gun. I always thought what they did to the poor Malvolio was horrid.

hm kinda creepy but interesting i like it alot

)_ Very nicely done, m'dear. I liked it quite a lot, and now I want to read Twelfth Night..(sp?). :)