HOLY SHIT!

This is such a great story, songifc or not, it is absolutely awesome. Im so happy you wrote it. :)

Fucking spectacular story. XDD

LOVE IT!

Hurrai! I love it please make another story I had never read such a good story I almost cry please try to do another story other thing if you need ideas ask them ok? well gotta go and keep it up with the good job XD

L.A.

Ah, I love the Koku An... and this story! Ah, insight and Ryu goodness all rolled into one... I loved all the 'hidden bits' in this story, too. Made it even deeper then it was already. So insightful. Keep up the good work!

heyy gurl ) nice story. life's like that, people have their own dark secrets. often not wanting people to reveal them. your vocab is strong too. n your story line is interesting. try to break them into smaller paragraphs to enable readers to read or the words are so tightly packed together. nice job n jiayoux (:

wow! great job! hahaX

nxt time wan u 2 gimme remidials liao!

hahaZ