| Reviews for Visitor |
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   rogueycherie chapter 12 . 4/10/2016 Sua história e muito, muito divertida! Parabéns! Adorei |
| TheUltimateGambit91 chapter 9 . 11/12/2008 LOL oh theme parks rule :P that was hilarious |
| TheUltimateGambit91 chapter 6 . 11/12/2008 “Did anyone order a psycho?” Rogue turned to Remy. “Ah guess momma’s here.” lol the most appropriate script for Mystique's arrival. |
| TheUltimateGambit91 chapter 4 . 11/12/2008 “It’s nice to meet you. I look forward to watching you grow up.” Rogue rolled her eyes, and Marie laughed. lol oh no, that's not the most NATURAL thing to say to your friend's future daughter. lol. -UltimateGammy91 |
| TheUltimateGambit91 chapter 3 . 11/12/2008 LOL oh silly Jean. :P Telepath and all and she doesn't INSTANTLY get what's going on. I'm enjoying your story so far :D -UltimateGammy91 |
| SpiritDragon-08 chapter 17 . 6/20/2008 great story. one thing though in chapter 11 u say that Marie learns to fly when shes four but in chapter 12 you show that she learns about the ability after she gets her powers. |
| aimee chapter 17 . 7/19/2006 Another fantastic story of yours, your really good and i no i already said it about your other one but you have such a great understanding of the characters and the way they act. If only they had employed you to write the scripts for the films. maybe then remy would have been in it! |
| Tzarista chapter 17 . 7/1/2006 great story |
| Fast chapter 17 . 5/22/2006 This had a good idea but I was disapointed that you did not mention Antartica or the more recent apocalypse thing where Remy joins him. Also Remy was way to out of character. |
| Murphyangel chapter 17 . 10/26/2005 I love your story, i can't wait to read your other stories! keep up the good work! |
| AnimeSiren chapter 17 . 9/27/2005 very nice update. |
| E.B.Ramsey chapter 17 . 4/28/2005 yay yay yay yay yay yay yay! This story makes me so happy! |
| Cassandra Cheney chapter 17 . 4/27/2005 Cool! I still love it. I can't wait till the next chapter! Bye, Cassandra Cheney |
| Chica De Los Ojos Cafe chapter 17 . 4/26/2005 Very funny! Great chapter! Really written nicely! UPdATE SOON! |
| Carla-p chapter 3 . 4/5/2005 OK well i really like this story anyway, but this chapter was friggen hilarious! When Rogue says "I'm thinking that i was drunk" - cracked me up, the sippy cup cracked me up - the remy being a big boy enough to take the lid off the sippy cup - cracked me up and Jean running into the room saying she heard they were expecting - yep you guessed it - cracked me up! It was a brilliant chapter! good job. |
