nice

Ahh Unbroken Universe. Love this.

*snickers* that scene with Moody...I can so imagine it happening. Wizards coming across the Muggle version of Halloween, priceless.
Good one.

If only Sirius is the real Secret Keeper in canon. While reading this I keep expecthing something horrible is bound to happen.

urgh, if only it had been this way. despite very little actually happening in this oneshot, you somehow captured my attention as well as your action-filled Unbroken stories, congrats.

I like this one much better that unbroken.

"Trick or Treat, Dumbass."

Moody Rules. Enough said.

I enjoyed your story. It was a short but sweet. :)

Well that's it.

I guess I'm through with your Harry Potter ff's.

I wish you'd write more... But I know that at some point "kids are done with playing in the same sandbox with the same toys all the time"

Anyways, a really nice OS, telling us between the lines what has not been.

But I was a bit paranoid. Everytime it knocked on Sirius' door, I thought it would be the Death Eaters. Somehow I thought they'd come for him on halloween, well I guess I was wrong.

Well, I just remembered, I still have still at least two thing from you to read:

1. Promises Defended last chapter (no, I'm not ever gonna stop on that ;) )

2. You said something of a surprise *head yerks up like one apprehensive Padfoot* I'm listening :D

Have a great and merry Christmas, until we read again

Standing Wolf

Well, I enjoyed it... didn't see much POINT to it, but it was still good... I really enjoyed it... especially the James and Lily bits and that bit at the end with the Quidditch team.

xox

Shealtiel

wow i am so glad i found that you wrote little oneshots for the UU stuff. this was great, of-course and i love that end. sigh...

I totally forgot that you had one of the Gryffindors on the Quidditch team named David Davidson. Rather odd to think about really-he wasn't much of the Quidditch type, I'd say.

Can you tell I'm bored though? Killing time before chow... Hah... Soon, SOON we shall have senior mess... And then I won't have to go and reread all of your old stories and stumble across cadre members masquerading as Quidditch players :-P.

I liked the Sirius & Moody scene in particular.

This is really good. Very 'aw'. Can I say one thing? I don't mean to be rude... it's just I felt the last paragraph wasn't the best way to finish it. It was too weak for an ending, I though. However, that's just my opinion, and my opinion only. I may be spouting off complete rubbish.

...if only that had happened