This was a very cute story. The weaving of the Weasley family members was great. They were there to push, prop, and guide the choosen four. This made Charlie and Percy look very cool. Thank you for sharing.

Harry's an asshole.

Brilliant! Loved the personalities of all the characters. Very well-portrayed.

"Beautiful," he whispered.

"Sunsets always are," Hermione said.

Sunsets. Right. He could go with that.

:D i loved it.

I really enjoyed this fic. It was nice, a lot of humour in it (I liked Hermione and the choo-choo train best. Harry 'reading' Forbidden Passions comes in second!), and there was a good bit of angstness too. (The first bit about Ron being Beef next to Harry had me wailing about the unfairness of the hero-sidekick world) In other words, a brilliant piece of work. Going to my favs!

Aw that's so sweet, Ron/Hermione make such a sweet couple. I like the brothers love advice!

Really good. You managed to keep everybody in character while still writing a believable romance. Not alot of people manage to do that. Good job. Love it, and I'll be looking forward to more of your work!

This is one of the best fics i have ever read, the other being Artful facade and the other was irresistable poison.. this is the first R/Hr i've read though, and i loved it! I now think that Harry/Ginny might be possible.. i think they were cute! Sky, you are my fave fan fic writter, keep up the great work and i hope to see more HP fan fics of yours soon!

...interesting...

wow i love this story, its so good!

wow...this was so good! it was so funny! thanks for writing a great story!

This is an old fanfic of yours, I think...but it was the best one I've ever read! I've told all of my friends to read it, because it was so GOOD!

I enjoyed this. It was different - in a good way, I promise.

Blimey, how... witty!

Well, witty being one of those words I pulled because I dunno exactly how to describe what I read, and I want very much to compliment you; but, er- anyways...

Brillant! (Ah, brillant's much better.) Very- erm- fluffy. Oh, don't get me wrong, nothing's wrong with fluff (actually, it was the fluff that kind of had me rooted here for one... two... hours reading all the parts in order - well, that and the image of shirtless Charlie Weasley...). I mean fluffy in a good way, in a way that makes you grin stupidly and just want to go 'aww...'. Then again, you *couldn't* you say 'aww...' with the impending romance of Ronnikins and Hermi?

Erg, stupid me, must stop rambling. The tie-in at the end with the hill... incredibly terrific. (And cute!) The George and Fred (and Angelina...) snippits... funny as sin. The 'Forbidden Romance'... well, it had me laughing for quite awhile. (Then again, small things amuse small minds. But even so...)

And the Harry/Ginny bits? Well, I can't say I'm an avid H/G fan (::takes out Harry and Ginny voodoo dolls and mimes them taking some long walks off some short piers::) but they were just portrayed so realistically, and all the scenes focusing on them were so sweet and - for lack of a better word - *real*, that I found myself smiling at the end (as opposed to gagging over the corniness that some other Harry/Ginny fics pose). The scenes were - dare I say it? - *sweet* and *touching*.

Anywho, terrific, terrific fic. Very well-written, and you kept everyone amazingly in-character (unlike myself, who has burned *countless* fics full of Ron professing his undying love for Hermione, much like anything you'd read in 'Forbidden Passion'). Plus, you threw in Percival (I knew I couldn't be the only one who thought that was his real name...) and Charlie (::drools::) - kudos to you! *And* overwhleming amounts of embarrassed (and hot) Ron... who couldn't love this?

Did I mention the entire fic was ingenious?

Love, Liz

-Hehe, now I get to add something else to my favourites list!

i like your ending, it's very sweet. but about the part on harry and ginny, i wish you have make harry's reaction clearer )