Reviews for The Pure Dawn
anonymous chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
It's been an 8 shitty year because you haven't posted A single chapter, please update I'm restless waiting to read your next chapter
gloriakazama chapter 5 . 3/1/2013
Oh my gosh! Please review quick! I'm getting really addicted really quick! Just wondering, are all the people in the Akatsuki villaige ninjas? Or are they towns folk as well? Also, is Satan Pein or Nagati or whatever? Just wondering
Seraphina Dragon chapter 5 . 11/8/2012
hope to read more
DomoLuv927 chapter 5 . 7/11/2012
Oh my gosh I love this story! Please update soon and how often do you usually update, just curious? :):):)
JaMisa27 chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
HELL YEAH NOW WE'RE GETTING SOMEWHERE LOL!
xartxisxaxbangx chapter 5 . 1/4/2011
Itachi and Kisame are the cutest pair ever. You rock.
xartxisxaxbangx chapter 4 . 1/4/2011
I like the use of Tartarus, that was really original (:
xartxisxaxbangx chapter 2 . 1/4/2011
I LOVED THE ENDING! AWESOME.
xartxisxaxbangx chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
damn, Hinata is so freaky. But I love it. Update soon!
Fan of Hina-chan chapter 5 . 6/11/2010
OMG I can feel Her fear!

Your so good at writing please write more on this story?
jkhp23d9785 chapter 5 . 4/18/2010
it goo i like it you should keep going
xXLooney-chanXx chapter 5 . 2/28/2010
Oh, i want more soo badly! please please PLEASE update soon! I'm begging you!
xXLooney-chanXx chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
"They screamed and screamed and got mad."

I love that line! It's so...psychotic. Love it! reading more...
YingYang890 chapter 5 . 12/14/2008
Hell! That was so funny! I can't wait for your next chepter and see what kind of person Satan is, excluding him being a really powerful person
Minty95 chapter 5 . 10/27/2008
wow kwaly cant wait till the next chapter!:D
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