GASP! That was uteerly inthrawling! I loved it and curse Quatre for ruining it! I would actually like to see more of this kinda thing from you...I liked the idea and would love to see you do another chapter too it!

LOL keep up the awsoem stotires please!

~TMBTJM

3 Cute. I love the unrequited love thing... and although our favorite dense American boy has yet to pick up on some of the things that were really said...

um hey. i am a fan of smells like teen spirit, but under the bridge isn't the same anymore. it isn't there. what's up?

lovelovelove!

update :D?

Beautifully done. The plot is an amazing idea - and one that I'll admit to being ridculously fond of.

I realize that you've asked for others to write similar pieces for it, however, I hold little talent for word-craft. I know it seems presumptuous of me, but I was hoping that I could simply send you a poem and ask you to write the story for me.

You don't have to, of course, and I'll not bother you about it again should you choose not to. However, I'd be immensely flattered if you would take on my request. Thank you!

"Never"

I never thought

of what others would think of me.

My life, my choices, my views -

They didn't matter in that.

I never thought

they would leave me.

Broken, hopeless, alone -

What did I do wrong?

I never thought

everything could go so wrong.

Mother, father, friends -

please, I need you here.

I never thought

this was the true me.

Hate, despair, useless -

How can you all turn away?

I never thought

optimism could be a shield.

Stay away, look away, go away -

Bad as am, I don't want to hurt you.

I never thought

I would need another so.

Confused, restless, lonely -

Why am I nothing anymore?

I never thought

the world was so dark.

Silent, harsh, unforgiving -

I wish I had comfort to return to.

aw, come on, please update! i wanna see what happens next! please? please? pleease? its an awesome story, and it could really become something! -

Oh...how dare you write somethng so enticing and not continue?

Please?

Sao: I thought this was uber cute!

Anni: I think you should continue it!

Sao: Who was the blonde? For a moment, I thought you might say Relena. That would suck

Anni: By the way, we're still going to be reading Smell Like Teen Spirit, but that's after we finish getting through our other...250 something update alerts -_-.

Sao: Yeah, your chapters tend to be super long, so we're saving them for last.

Anni: Plus, as the saying goes, you save the best for last!

~Sao & Anni

Oh yum. Heero is quite the sexy beast, as you describe him. I like them both in this setting. I find myself drawn to the AUs of this pairing and this is one of my favorites: a school setting with a mutual semi-attraction/crush. So, very nice story. I am impressed and pleased at the find. I do hope that your assignment went well.

very interesting...

Don't think that I could actually write a part myself (me and poetry are just worlds apart and my writing isn't up to this standard) but yeah, it was really good. I think this is the first time I've read a story that was based on a poem and it was done really well.

Does your school allow shonen-ai content in stories? My school sure as hell doesn't.

I realize it's been quite a while since you posted this and it hasn't been updated, but I'd like to help you with this, if the offer still stands. I'm not sure how you intend to do this - have me write the next chapter around my poem and then post it here, maybe. I have a few in mind, mostly ones my mother wrote. I'll have to dig out her poem folder to get them for you, but I'll try to have them for you tomorrow, okay?

Hopefully, we'll talk soon.

~ Satanira

Well, since you asked so nicely...

Ok, first off, I'm not a fan of poetry, can read it, critique it, and even write a bit, but I'm all for plain speaking and dislike all the hidden meanings.

Plus Poetry has to be read at a time when you can actually sit there and appreciate it. So I'm biased.

I found this piece a little flat, no real drive to it. A comfortable read that I wouldn't really remember distinctly if you know what I mean.

Though, being that I'm biased about poetry I may have missed the point completely.

As always your writing is well structure, a little wordy in some cases but with lovely and very visual descriptions. You make a point of creating each of the Gundam Characters differently in every story unlike some people who just let you assume the stereotype and go from there. Sometimes, like Noin in this story, you make them seem a little out of character, but they generally have a lot of class and your easily forgiven.

Small details are cool, especially if it's your character noticing them. (Descriptions of Heero in this case).

I was going to say I hope your project goes well, but since this fic was published last year I'm guessing it might already have finished, even if you are keeping it ongoing. So I hope your project did go well.

Keep up the writing,

Maz

I really love this story. It was really great. About your Smells Like Teen Spirit story. I really feel for you. I had written some poems on this site amd before they even shut the poetry section down the took off my best poems because some people thought they were to depressing. But that was only because I was having a bad day when I wrote them. Well I'll be checking your site for updates on my favorite stories. Keeping writing great stories. Ciaou.

cute story... the poem confused me a bit but then again, I'm not really into the poetry thing. I found that people try too hard on those things and well... I'll just keep my oppinions to myself on that one. On the other hand, I'd like to see a continuation on this fic. Being the 1x2x1 fan that I am, no story is complete unless my two fave bishies end up together