Reviews for The Parallel
Guest chapter 4 . 7/31/2017
Took me a bit, but I figured out the "Take One" part that didn't get an answer. That'd be "Silence of the Lamas."
Eruantalon chapter 1 . 12/14/2015
I just came back after some time away from and finished this story... Very good! It was obvious which choice was the right one for Elly to make, but actually making it was another matter, and emotionally adjusting to it was even harder. She felt very real from the beginning on. Some other reviewer asked how these Morph Forcers are accomplishing much of anything if they're so concerned about just-war theory, and the answer was obvious: They aren't. They never claimed to be. They're ordinary kids thrust head-first into this mess, and trying to muddle through it as best they can.
Aarik Wrath chapter 28 . 9/8/2015
"I am a member of the most ancient race in the galaxy-"

"Skrit Na."

"They don't count. They're weird."

"Skrit. Na."

"Dammit."

Seriously, the Skrit Na were space faring and already so old no one knew where the fuck they came from when the Ketran first got into space.

They're the oldest (surviving, at least.) species in the Galaxy.

The Ellimist doesn't like acknowledging them. Probably because seriously, they haven't changed at all in more then a hundred million years. They're weird.

Sorry, I just think that fact is funny enough I had to point it out.
CatGirlFireflare chapter 28 . 1/8/2015
Hmmm, ominous. Also having the Ellemist referred to a 'the hedgehog' is extremely funny. He's completely in character too, as confusing and wise and strange as ever.
Elenna123 chapter 36 . 10/4/2014
Would it be possible for you to add another chapter to this story when the next one is posted? Otherwise, PM would be great! :)
dogman15 chapter 36 . 10/4/2014
And thus, it is finished.
CatGirlFireflare chapter 27 . 6/18/2014
WHOOAAAAA! The explanation about a Yeerk's fugue was interesting, and surprising. And wow, Elly is holding the Ellimist as a cat in her lap, haha...
CatGirlFireflare chapter 26 . 4/13/2014
OHHhhhhh...
That... that was a really amazing and sad view of seeing/feeling hte Yeerk die... Very sad.
CatGirlFireflare chapter 24 . 2/25/2014
Whoa... This. was. so. GREAT! This chapter did such an incredible job of showing how the Yeerks AREN'T all evil, and even the 'bad' ones still have personalities and friends. Brilliant!
CatGirlFireflare chapter 23 . 2/10/2014
Hahaha, cool backstory about the lamb dinner! I keep feeling bad for the Yeerk, how it's going to die.
The way you wrote Anifal's personality is just so perfect, exactly the way Andalite personalities are in the series. Greatly written!
CatGirlFireflare chapter 22 . 1/21/2014
Hm, neat fact about the mom. The mostly relaxing atmosphere in this chapter was really great, it gives a break before the excitement and danger comes back. And that description about how a turtle feels basking was really cool!
dogman15 chapter 35 . 1/20/2014
I didn't miss anything important in the last few years, did I? Is this done or is there more to read?
CatGirlFireflare chapter 21 . 1/1/2014
Ahhhh, it's so nice that Elly gets to spend time with her family (parallel family). I can't fully understand their movie-name-game rules or hints, but it sounds fun and I think it's really creative.
CatGirlFireflare chapter 20 . 12/8/2013
Aww, that "Save me a dream" thing is so sweet...! But Elly's wrong, isn't she- this mission is not going to be so easy. *ominous music plays*
CatGirlFireflare chapter 19 . 12/8/2013
That's so cool! (The 'Ssstram ship being a tree' thing, but also the entire chapter!) I hope Elly or maybe Chester finds some way to have the Yeerk not die, especially since Chester is- understandably- so unhappy about having it/her starve like that.
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