I dont think MJ or Otto for that matter, would refer to him as a 'super villain'. It would be more realistic for him to be thought of as a madman or something like that.

Heh. You apologize too much. It seems like every other chapter of your stories, you apologize for something. Don't be sorry. Just write what you want ;)

Loving the story so far.

I like the word medusinic. Did you come up with that?

It had been longer than 'just a short time' that he wore it, you know-and he WAS living on an abandoned pier by the East River . . . when you can't wash your clothes, they get filthy fast.

VERY good. I love how it's so dark and realistic...well as you said, corpse puppets aren't very realistic, but you catch my drift. The emotions are realistic. And you did an excelent job at animating O'Conell, I hate that guy! Again, grat job. It was wonderful and I hope to see more of your stories.

Fall to the floor and twitch all you want. Excellent fic. You didn't focus on the supernatural aspects- instead, you looked at their effect. Great writing- I'll look for the sequel.

Wow, chip chip 22 was so... bloody, and Otto killed... and the end was so... not happy...

I LOVE IT! I'm glad you didn't do the one where Rosie came back. You're right, it wouldn't have been realistic at all. I did kind of like the idea with Otto dying and coming back, but this is awesome too. I love the way it ended so inconclusively and unhappily. The disorder of it makes me happy. Chaos and disorder always makes me happy.

I do seriously wonder what Susan will do with the plans Otto left with her. Did you forget about that or will you address it in a sequel? Just remember, though a sequel could come out of this, doesn't mean it needs one. Don't try to force out a half-assed sequel. Sometimes open ended stories should say that way. Not to stop you from writing a sequel, just know I would still be perfectly content if you left the ending like this.

Penguin Peaces!

Wow. . . . Wow. That's about all I can say. I personally want to know more about Lynnea's daughter. Ever do a sequel, have Lynnea's daughter in it.

*does end of fic dance* yay! very good ending there, and at least rosie's at rest again. i have to say, this is one of the best fan fics i've read in a long time, kudos on you

Nice chapter I like it a lot.

Great chapter I like it.

Ominous and dark and unsettling- very nice. You follow four different fights (or flights) without any real confusion in the transitions. All characters are grimly real- great chapter. I'm not all that eager for the story to end, even if it must- it's fun to read.

Nice chapter I like it.

I finished this the night I started reading, but I was too lazy to review again. Curse it all, hm?

I understood that she was basically just a mindless zombie. In a way, it was kind of sad knowing that Otto's efforts were futile. Then again, in a very sick way, it was kind of amusing to think of Otto talking to a corpse... I don't know. I have issues.

Okay- Sextapus? Hilarious! That whole conversation was just hilarious. So was that thing in chip chip one with Peter and MJ talking about Peter's landlord (whose name I don't want to try and spell right now.)

I noticed that Otto has spent a large percentage of the story injured. Lots of violence and squishy stuff. Yay!

Harry is such a little pussyboy. I guess he's been in the background of the fic, so he can't really help it, but he's the same in the movie. All well. He still has time to prove himself. *snicker*

I'm not clear on the voodoo doll thing. Is the guy's spirit actually trapped in the doll or is it a generic voodoo doll and he's still in his body somewhere? Anyway, Penguin Peace!

ooh! This is going to be awesome!