| Reviews for On My Own |
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   Kathy T chapter 19 . 2/12/2010 I actually really really like your story a LOT! Stayed up until 1:30AM-ish to finish it. . .and I have school tomorrow. . . Lol. Your story had a really good plot. There were a few flaws though. Like some random facts about the Wizarding world taht were in the books (goblins, not gremlins; Crabbe & Goyle aren't brothers). But I suppose that doesn't have any revelence to your story. Lol, one thing that did get to me was that your story was a little rushed. Like, you had the perfect plot and storyline, but I think you could've gone more into detail. Well, overall, I like your story(: ~KT |
| Kathy T chapter 14 . 2/12/2010 -phew- Okay, Cal's not some freak stalker. Lol, that's good. Ahaha |
| Kathy T chapter 5 . 2/11/2010 Holy crap. . . Is Cal a wizard? Didn't see that coming, lol. ~KT |
| Kathy T chapter 1 . 2/11/2010 Oh shot! Dude, I like your story so far. Ahaha. OH OH! And "Cal Hawk" reminds me of "Cal Hockley" in Titanic the Movie! o.o Is your character based on him? Lol, or is it just a big coincident? Ahaha. Well, off to read your story! ~KT |
| GP chapter 3 . 6/4/2009 Goblins run the bank, not gremlins. |
| onefa chapter 17 . 11/25/2007 Nope,I'm not gonna finish this ..but what were you thinking? |
| dramione4eva006 chapter 14 . 11/17/2007 luv ur story so far. i know that song jay sean wrote it right? reply me and tell me who wrote if you get a chance. thanx. can't wait to read the rest of your story. |
| Hidden but Seen chapter 6 . 11/3/2007 um Crabbe and Goyle aren't brothers |
| Ayana-llama chapter 19 . 10/29/2007 Very good! I enjoyed this very much! |
| anahitathebooklover chapter 19 . 10/29/2007 okay... this TOTALLY ROCKED! i swear, i LOVED it! into my favs it goes.. V-E-R-Y well written and the idea is just GREAT! |
| PinkMusicalCherry chapter 19 . 10/24/2007 Aw. such a sweet story. Ur a total rockin' writer! Awesome story. Xxo |
| RevesCasses chapter 2 . 10/23/2007 Wait. Isn't Hermione's birthday on the 19th September? I like the story- |
| professionalhatstand chapter 18 . 9/24/2006 lol great chapter i hope you update soon that was great poor draco! |
| SexyDraco04 chapter 18 . 7/31/2006 awesome chapter! i loved it...and it was funny! awesome idea when it came to draco's products...haha...very smart...lol great job...keep up the great work! K |
| silverstorm93 chapter 18 . 7/28/2006 Sorry, but I can't exactly say that this chapter is as kick ass as your previous ones but in fairness, it's still good. I liked the 1st part where you captured Hermione through a ping pong ball and such but I think you could've been more creative for Draco's "punishment" anyways, I'm glad you updated. Pleae update soon. Yah... Keep up the good work and I expect more kick ass stuff from you from your next chapter since this story has alot of potential. Silver :) |
