Seems odd that Harry would tell some stranger so much and provide weapons as well.

Did the Weasleys actually win the money, or did they take it from Harry?

Loved what i read so far but why is chapter 12 the same as chapters 1-11 all combine into one

Already off to a ridiculous start with a shitty premise and bad writing-why would Dumbledore even KNOW of Predators let alone be FRIENDS with them? They're anathema to his ideals!

Damn, you skipped the complete sex scene. Why wouldn't you write a lemon if you put your fiction on M rating? :(

Wtf? Harry is back and the first thing he does is becoming best friends with a stranger named Brax and tell him all his secrets even Hermione hasn't heard before? Is Harry brain damaged or why is he immediatly 'best mate' with basically the first male he meets? First Ron, then Brax. Pathetic. He should be training himself, hunting Death Eaters and wooing Hermione instead of babysitting. But its your fanfiction.

Hmmm, Dumbledore is supporting of the idea to turn Harry into a killer and to injury 8 students? I am impressed, very AU/OC.
I am excited to read what happens next.

loved it

A decent story, but it's chock full of plot holes, beginning with chapter 1. There is no explanation of how Dumbledore met the predators, let alone became friends with one enough to be entrusted with the communications device & exchange favors.

This was an interesting story, I'll give credit where it's due. I may not know everything about the AVP universe, but the Predators were always just badass to me. And a story involving Harry being trained as a Yautja is pretty cool, given most people focused more on the Xenomorphs. And oddly enough, a Xeno-Voldemort sounds really awesome. (As long as he doesn't die like a chump)
That being said, some things seemed a bit rushed. Some examples might include the Harry/Hermione pairing. And the whole "Ron-turning-into-a-d**k" could have been done better. One odd thing, is why did Ron of all people transfer to Slytherin? For starters, he's ridiculously prejudiced against anything supposedly "dark" and/or "Slytherin" so the house change was odd. Secondly, Malfoy would never be friends with Ron due to Ron's "Blood Traitor" status.
But other than those things, the story was all around still enjoyable. I give "Predator" a solid 7 out of 10. It's a good read for AvP fans, and I will recommend it to my friends who are fans. I'll also take a look at the sequel.
See ya on the flip side!

good fic

U wanted to write a superb powerful harry story I get it but in as u wrote u got confused and messed up everthing in the story which could have been a wonderful fic.
read it yourself first before posting. ..

Bahahaha not like this.

Oy, so it's one of these stories. Before the 6th book hit, I guess. Oh well, fair to say that JK Rowling screwed up more than you could possible do here.

Ah, a deus ex machina plot.

Well, I'm in the mood for a super harry story, so why not, the spelling errors are fairly minor.