I liked the story Crystalgail. The only point that seemed to dissaude me from it, was the lack of description. You work well with vocals, but it was missing the description. It had some, but...it seemed to be missing to much of it. Good luck with Jessica and Kyle.

Pretty, but you need to be careful with your verb tenses. You use past tense most of the time, but occasionally you'll slip in some present tense. You should probably stick with one or the other.

Other than that, I like it.

Aw, That is soo sweet, I will be keeping an eye out for more of your stuff!

Crystal! ANG SWEET NI ALEX! WAHIHIHI! WALA LNG! MORE POWER BESTIE

I like all of the couples, but i like the Luna-Alex couples more. This was really good. Anyway, please keep writing.