this story was great!

this is so bad. what kind of person just accepts the fact that her mother has died by doing nothing? seriously? do some research on emotion.

Aw...good ending.

Another explosion. Shredder seems to have a penchant for those. YIKES!

BAD ERIN BAD! The wierd thing is...my actual name is Erin. XD. Anyways, she should know running off into the streets of NYC at night is a BAD idea. Stupid guilt.

O.O ANOTHER cliffhanger~

EEP! Cliffhanger!

Excellent job on finding a motive for Shredder and Co, I always have a hard time with bad guys. This chapter is well written, but you might want to show more emotion on the girls' part, since their mother just died. I'd tell you to keep writing but I just realized this is already a completed story. XD

Aww, Raph, no need to rub salt in the wound! Can't you smell the angst?

SQE! I can already see it all playing out! YEY! I love these type of stories. And IRISH! I'm part Irish and the only one in my family that shows it. My hair is curly/wavy and all colors of browns and reds. I LOVE IT! IRISH! IRISH! IRISH! On to the next chapter!

TCT :P

Oo WTFlip?.

I thought that Erin's story was well written. It was hard for me to believe that this was your first attempt at fan fiction. Despite what everyone else thinks, I liked the cliffhangers. They helped to build suspense within the story. Great job!

That was a great story, it was a little sad when the girls' mom died, I like the new cartoon too, I'm a Power Puff fan myself, I wrote the five year old ones when I was 15, and I worked on the teenaged ones when I turned 16,one of the teenaged stories was when The Power Puffs met the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, and I like Bubbles too, no offense but Splinter and Mikey are my favorite characters in The Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles please don't be mad at me, my favorite Ninja Turtle episode is The Monster Hunter, that chapter with the kittens reminded me of The Christmas Aliens episode

I loved your story to Chapter 1. It was very interesting. I am going to read all of the other Chapters.

Kendra

Niceyy story!

A: Guess wat? There will be the second trilogy in the "Goddess of Love!" Hope you see it!

C: Finally...

S: Cool

Chibi C.A.S: COL STORY AND MAKE SURE YU READ "BACK TO NEW YORK" THE SEQUEL TO "The Goddess of Love"

Great ending. It was a great sotry overall and I can't wait for the sequel. I hope you will forgive this short review, but I must go and do some errands. GReat job and I hope you keep writing and reviewing!