hey more please, this is really twisted and i like it

yay. another great story to read

I like the story and the way that you ended this chapter, but why is he so guilty over his past? Is that why he feels guilty? I can't wait to see where you go from here and I like the way that you have the baby talk to him.

*said with malice* Ooh, I hate you for leaving it like this. You had better update soon..or else. *smiles suddenly* Please?

i really like your fanfic but i can't really beleive that you are having him hit her just like her dad did. i hope you write the next chapter soon. so please do so. oh yeah just a little suggestion but you might want to fix that or help that problem but i wont flame you if you don't. thanks

Chelley Smiley

Me no like the bad Riddick. I like the story though, just not the bad Riddick.