This is absolutely incredibly horribly fantastic. You are an internet god. A real invader if I ever saw one, for serious- this reads like the show. I love that you tied it into canon- while Zim is on Foodcourtia! GENIUS!- and this is just. too. cool.

I'm assuming this is deadfic, but I just wanted to let you know: you rock.

I know this a dead fic, but damn this was amazingly sharing, it was wonderful.

Wonderful fic! It has nothing to do with the usual sappy and utterly cheesy type of OOC crap that is found too often in romantic fics.

I love the way you make the characters interact with eachother in a most IC way.

but PLEASE, PLEASE update! It would be a shame not to finish this fic!

I LURRVE this fanfic and the one on which it is based! Please write more write more write MORRE!

Well, I'm amused. Nice job!

Alright! th' story's gettin good now! Update!

Yes! IZ fanfic that isn't complete crap! I shower bookoos of honor and glory upon your name!

-showers-

Then I poke you with a pointy stick to encourage you to update.

-pokes-

Don't fall out on this one; there are those of us out here who are intelligent enough to appreciate good writing, and are starved of it. See? You can see my reader-ribs.

Anyway, I don't mind the chapters being relatively long - heck, I /like/ it that way - and am awaiting your next update with all the eagerness of a smeet. FEAR THE SMEET!

Update, please? :-)

OH MY GAWD.

I fell on the floor laughing from all of this. I love Skoodge's reaction, and Zim's reaction, and even OC's reaction. Just... hilarious.

I like the theory of Irkens obsessing like that. I guess RedSnacks, PurplePuppets, OCSkoodge, and possibly ZimDib.

Oh oh oh... just hilarious. Continue on or I shall be sad.

I love your story. I love it, I love it I love it. I love the idea, I love your OC, I love Skoodge, I love stuff that is green. Keep going!

Really enjoyed reading your story and lokking forward to reading the next chapter.

I LOVE IT!

I love the additions to my dialogue you've made. Definitely funny - I in fact snorted tea out my nose for "Do you FEEL my affection for you? It is EPIC!"

That's going to be a new favorite for a long time.

I like the idea of Irkens being very single-minded when they get attracted/attached to something. Seems about right

Oh, my, this story is wonderful. It's a twisted soap opera waiting to happen. Your characterizations are excellent, and everything's so true to the show.

I just love the nameless food service drone. She's a very well-rounded, sympathetic character. I like the fact that she's been assigned to food service because she's "too soft," not because she'd be an incompetent Invader. With Skoodge and Tak, we've already seen that admirable abilites aren't neccessarily rewarded by Irken society. In fact, we've seen them punished more often. I can't wait for her to meet Skoodge.

I also love your depiction of Zim as someone who can quickly (perhaps even ingeniously) slap together some complicated invention like the RoboZim, but who is so hopelessly cut off from reality by his own self-absorbtion that his inventiveness only leads to disaster. Very IC.

I love so many things about this that I'll have to stop now. Definitely watching.

Great Fic, and Zim is so in character.

I hope Skoodge and the nameless Service Drone will meet soon.

I absolutely ADORE this fic! at first, I was a little wary when you mentioned an OC, but this girl is awesome. so original and new! clever and witty! and don't even get me started on how well you kept everyone in character! this is such a nice change from the monotonous Zim fics in this section. I'm SO glad I read this and I'm definately looking forward to more. great job!

cool! Continue.

TFL