I was confused for a whike like wtf 3 different scenario

What horrible selfish friends

He was just as meN to her motoki i dont blame her for her words

Perfect

This is lovely. And I want a sequel.

Okay... I have a serious love/hate relationship with this fanfic. I had never read it before today and I just went through it all in one go. LOL.

There were things I absolutely adored... like the humor and the love between them all. I really loved that you showed how much all the girls adore one another. And if I'm being honest, I practically wept like a baby through the entire last chapter...

But they all sufferered so much, in so many ways, which of course made me want to scream out at the author (as Kirk did against Khan) and vow to take vengeance. I can be hard on them too, but I tend to prefer the enemy be the only real obstacle. I am a big ol' softie.

There were some technical issues I wanted to point out though. A contract would not have been valid because she had a witness to prove she was misled and because in Japan they are minors until the age of 20 (though I heard that will be changing) and a contract would not be valid unless a parent or guardian signed as well.

And since you added the scene about Kenji and his shotgun... let me just say I wouldn't have minded a scene where he goes after thethat tricked her in the first place. It would be hilarious if he wet his pants... on air! LOL.

I was absolutely determined to hate this story... instead I am adding it to my favorites. Well done!

That was a very interesting idea and story, I really loved the twist with the beryl share in Mamoru’s head causing the dream drama. Smart move! I wasn’t a huge fan of the three possible candidate choice chapter with all the endings, not because it wasn’t a cute idea but it was difficult to execute in a single chapter format (maybe if it had been three separate chapters, each with a clear title indicating an alternate ending, it would have been less confusing?).

Seiya or Haruka were my guesses for possible celebrity matches, but the Tuxedo Mask one caught by totally by surprise!

It was, at times, a little confusing to follow. I couldn’t even put my finger on exactly why - maybe not clear enough scene breaks or description between dialogue bits? But even with that small quibble I really enjoyed the story you told and wanted to commend you on a job well done. This was a BIG endeavor and a lot of your time and energy, thank you so much!

Loved it! Super sweet!

And I was really hoping the celebrity guest was Seiya, although I had suspicions it's could have been Tux too (or even Diamond), but the Haruka one through me for a loop. I personally really enjoyed the idea of the alternate endings. I think it takes some real skill to be able to imagine the different pathways a story could take. Bravo girl! Loved it!

Hey, i like your story so far. Just one thing: this whole eye-colour-thing becomes annoying...cerulean eyes look in blue and green eyes widen and so on. Its ok but not like in every second sentence! But the story is good

I was binge reading this untill 2am in the morning, I let you know! I laughed a lot at some part while reading this. I really love reading a fanfic where Usagi is well-loved by everyone and a fic where Rei never loves Mamoru but instead have a protective feelings towarss Usagi, actually reminds me of the manga.

I was so angry when Mamoru made Usagi's neck bleeding though. Eventhough he thought Sailor Moon is someone else, he didnt show remorse when he realize Usagi and Sailor Moon is the same. How can he not realize that Usagi have wounds on her neck when they made love?

Mamoru is kinda psychopathic here, feel sorry for Motoki somehow hahahhahaa. So angsty and emo, OMG, it would be stressful to be Mamoru's one and only friend!

Motoki/Makoto is cute! I mean, Nephrite was paired with Naru in the anime anyway, so why not Makoto/Motoki?

Thank you very much for writing a great fanfic. Your Sailor Moon fanfic relish my thrist over my Sailor Moon obsessions. I hope to see more stories from you!

aw cute! and i love how usagi seems to have matured over the story

i bet the guy is haruka lol. what a sight!

haha. mamorus reaction at the end was funny.

Just amazing! Another amazing story!

I loved it! I was hoping for a Seiya and Mamoru smack down, but having his guts ripped out on live television kind of made up for it.
I hope you write more stories!