Man, it's funny because I started reading this thinking it was totally inspired by Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicles... but then I saw the publication date LOL
Some concepts are so similar to TRC that I'm seriously wondering if Nanase Ohkawa read your fanfic before writing its scripts lolz

Anywho, the idea was indeed really original for when you wrote it, so congrats XD
But now I've read some reviews and ended up getting spoilers of the ending (I wanted to see if anyone was thinking about Tsubasa too XD Yeah, I'm super DUMB. F*ck), so I don't know if I'll be patient enough to read everything... sorry (

I love this story Thank you so much for uploading it :D

nice.

I have a request, however,

Shoaran (Shaolin? however you're writing his name) is Chinese (Cantonese). It's really, really, really jarring to suddenly see the Japanese onii-chan instead of go go (big brother in Cantonese) (not sure how the pin yin is, it's gou gou or go go, say the o like a the short o of top (with a british accent, singsong))

You couldn't...change it to go go, could you?

NYA~! who is 'him'!

;_; so sad..

Ah~! I still don't like dangyun... he should just give up on her... It's his own damn fault!

I have a feeling i'm not going to like siwan either.. she seems arrogant and naive to me. I really want to slap her.. -hand in position-

oh... okay it not some random pedo... :D

Dx NO NO NO! NO! THIS IS A SxS FIC! (and i mean syaoran) NOT A SAKURA x SOME RANDOM PEDOPHILE! Dx NOOOOOOO! \(0O0)/

0_o at that last part my sick side yelled out: PEDO PEDO PEDO PEDO oh wait she's 19 right...?

;

X"D drama~~~!

I really got scared at first because i thought it was that dude XD lol- that might be pretty awesome though... more dramatic XD /shot

:D love rival~~~!

:D ah~~! yes yes yes!

Ah! lovely chapter- i was very confused as to what was happening until the end.

This is one of the worst fanfics I have ever read and believe me when I say that I have read many (around 890). It goes against everything I have believed in.