But...Revans mask

Why would you do that?! Revan, the dark lord himself, being turned back to the the light in such a stupid way! What is the point of writing a story about the Dark Side ending of kotor, if revan isn't on the Dark side at the end of it all!

Posted 2 December 2012, at and the Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. I was posting directly to the actual story threads, but my computer went down for the second time in six months with a virus in June of 2012. Then in November kotorfanmedia went down for reasons unknown, so I was stymied in my attempts to post the reviews. I had waited for it to revive, but you on deserve your reviews.

KOTOR on the Star Forge: As the Republic fleet attempts to flee, Revan has some cleaning up to do.

The piece has Revan roaring back into power with a vengeance. His dealing with the incompetent Admiral was perfectly done.

Im not sure if this is true lore, but as I understand it, the dark side only changes your skintone if you cant control it. Revan being able to use the star forge should mean his skin is still the same...some food for thought :D

Near the bottom, it says "As they neared the bridge and the Jedi Revan found himself smiling, he was going to enjoy this." Which shouldn't state Jedi Revan

Hey lexington's hammar

Really talented work on Darth revan returns and i enjoyed reading through it.

I have one question though. Did anything happen to shalla after Zhar woke her? I may have missed it but I am still curious.

My email is...

Keep up the good work!

hey great chapter

i think i missed something but revans lightsaber is silver?

I thought it was were you just talking about the hilt?

that was a great chapter and stuff oh and bastila is still on the lights side but she is justy hiding it right?

oh wait i kept reading and i read the part were mission and zaalbar came. He he sorry but keep the idea about the exile.

dude what about mission and zallbar there like gone although they were mentioned. like six chapters ago.

In any case if they are there then yay but also great story hope you make more kotor ones. Heres a idea play the second game and mention revan but also have the exile and stuff. I give this story five stars

What a great and beautiful story you wrote here , one of the few that has a underlying moral teaching if you know how to look "underneath the underneath". with this ending you could make a part II if you wanted quite easily and expanding way beyond the normal places others went , beyond the true sith also . Hope youll write other story as beautiful as this one and complete them faster.

This was awesome. :)

great story

Good story, but ALOT of grammatical errors. Work on that in your future stories. Otherwise...SHIBBY!