Alamo, I just found u! I love L&OCI! Loved your stories. How do I go about getting NC-17? My email address: . If I am doing this wrong, let me know. Thanks.

I loved these 2!

Could you please send me the NC-17 version?

Very angst-y, loved it! It was really lovely how you described their soul connection and relationship.

loved it any more like this can you email me the nc17 version thanx

I had mixed feelings about this fic the first time I read it, and I still do, but overall I enjoyed it. Good work! I wish you'd write more in the CI fandom! Anything in Seasons 7-9 strike your fancy?

This was one of my favorites of the early CI stories. (From my perspective as a fanfic reader.) I hope you find inspiration for CI again, because this was suspenseful and a thrill to read.

Nice story, nice pacing and suspense.

Could you email the nc-17 version, please?

Ooh, I loved this. Amazing! Truely Awesome! I want to read the "mature" version!

~Snyder~

Great story! I loved it, great character insights, interesting plot, fabulous story!

This is my first review. I'd say you should be honored, but that would be egocentric of me. *wink*

I am a Goren fanatic, as well as Vincent D'Onofrio. There couldn't be a better actor for the part. Because he is Goren, his movement, his way of getting into the part. It's perfect. The same goes for Eames.

To the point. I loved it. The angst. The way it flowed. It was a great write. Of course you left out the explicit part, but I understand. *I wouldn't mind reading it...*another wink*

That's how you know you have come across a good writer. When, they make you feel. And that's exactly what you did. I hurt, I angst, oh boy did I. I might of possibly even cried. maybe.

Anyway, brownie points to you.

- Sabien

Wow your story was great. I like when alittle more time is spent on Eames than Goren. Everyone seems to have a version of him but few go into Eames's character as deep. Looking forward to the NC-17 version!

where are we supose to go to get the other version it doesn't say please let me no if you can great story

OMG, I love this story. I'm gonna have to email you to get the complete version. I loved the angst and that was the greatest ending.

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