I like it so far, but some of the syntax is awkward and I have to read it a few times to have it make sense.

i ty to read this but i just couldnt it just so MANY NOPE

this was awesome story it was too too i don't even know the right words to say! I loved it time for sequel!

ooh there's a sequel to this? cool

that is not good poor Starfire and Beast Boy

that was freaky and i love how you use Raven's emotions and i love learning new things about how the comic titans formed

well that is a surprise who would have thought Raven's mind would split (and i'm not talking about Teen Titans Go yuck) this is really good!

well you named this chapter prefectly and it was very surprising even if it was before the others seasons of Teen Titans i could still see it happening

this is interesting of course i will keep reading

Om-nom-nom (Eats cupcake like a tiger eats its prey.) -Everyone else disgusted by how I eat- -looks around-What?

Something just sets my teeth on edge whenever I see Terra and Beastboy in the same place. And I trust my instincts. Although, I would like to meet Jealousy. Preeeease? -stares with Beastboy's Look-

Ya know... I really like it when somebody actually completes their story. Half the stories on here are unfinished. BTW, this is awesome! It explores the reasons that raven gives herself.

"What is PMS? Can you eat it?"

AHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HHAHA
that was great.

good story ill read the sequel!

Titans! Stop!" Hilarious dude. The titans need to seriously discover . Ooh what if Beast boy catches Raven reading BBRae fanfic? _Teen Titans theme song starts_ When there a plot you know who to review... you!

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